○ 08: you can't always get what you want

[acertifieduser]

Due to the unpopular nature of "Little Black Raincloud," we're starting a new story tonight.

UNTITLED #16
PART ONE

John opened his eyes. His room reflected the city outside: gloomy, dark, and a luring invitation to sleep until the safe dawn. The putrid smell of the city wafted through his door. He sighed and breathed in, chest expanding,

Comments

[failedcreator]

I quite like this story! It is a fine beginning.

[acertifieduser]

Thank you! I really appreciate it, Victor. How do you feel about the name 'John?' I was worried it might be too simple.

[failedcreator]

I have great affection for this name! Does it not make him pleasing to many men?

[acertifieduser]

I don't know. 'John Doe' or 'John Smith' is considered kind of the average, generic name. I like it and I think it has some good substance, but I don't want it to be too plain.

[failedcreator]

I do not think it plain! It is a good, strong name.

[acertifieduser]

Thanks. I'll keep it.

[failedcreator]

Please do so, sir. You have considerable talent.