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Through a Glass Darkly, Ch. 1

Jun 13, 2011 13:33

Title: Through a Glass Darkly, Chapter One: I Love Him, I Love Him Not
Author: acenpokerface
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Mentions of sex.
Pairings: 1896, mentions of 5986, 27K, LamPin, pretty much every het pairing out there.
Summary: Haru considered her friend. Yes, it was definitely Chrome-chan, even if she was 10 years older. But it was a little shocking ( Read more... )

character: chrome dokuro, 1896, khr, fanfic, character: hibari kyoya

Comments 3

runesque June 14 2011, 06:43:39 UTC

B-Be still my heart *o*

Your portrayal shows all the eccentricities that I so adore in this pairing: The fight to the death that translates to his acknowledgement of her, the unspoken sentiments, the slight power play, and - dear me - the entirety of the fourth last paragraph is soooo delicious I could devour it slowly word for word. It's been a while for this kind of fic for me~

I love how oasis-like the sisterhood is, her promises to the girls (and her quiet heartache) and her moments with the guys which served as her various "first times" (also piqued my curiosity, how your Gokuharu would play out). The brief mention of her mother as well as her wish not to end up like her is appreciated.

That I agree with your chosen pairings is a bonus for me, which makes reading your universe even more enjoyable. Looking forward to more of your writings (and insight and characterisation and delicious 1896)for this fandom =D

acenpokerface June 14 2011, 07:45:38 UTC

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH ( ... )

runesque June 14 2011, 14:48:52 UTC

OH. Why, I didn't think you'd have seen my stuff XDD. Yeah, I guess I've always been associated with 1896 since the early days of KHR fandom when shipping 1896 was considered Very Novel. You can't begin to imagine how happy I am that more and more of this pairing is cropping up these days ( ... )