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Re: technicalities - mark/lexie - pg-13 shiparker May 11 2009, 19:08:38 UTC
You're sssooooo awesome! Really, this was so funny and so Mark and Lexie. You have always been brilliant when it comes to every single Grey's dynamics (Meaning I totally wanted to read more prompts from you *winks*). I love how Lexie gets what she wants without make it a big fight. She so knows how to handle him (Oh no, I am taking this as cannon heee) and I love how he is easily bend. I have to say I loved this part:

“Not if you’re going to act like it’s a chore,” is accompanied by a pout that is a complete act, probably entirely transparent too, but it works like a charm, and he maybe looks a little regretful. She adds, “You’re just probably scared because you haven’t been on a date with a girl since like high school.”

“I am not scared.”

“Fine,” she says, wetting her lips but still keeping her hand firmly pressed against his chest, “you’re intimidated.”

“Oh, I’ll take you on a date,” he says, challenge officially accepted. “I’ll take you on the date to end all dates.”

Oh, the male ego... and it seemed something he would say just because of what she said. I had to supress a giggle like Lexie did because it was indeed hilarious.

You're so good on writting, not overly sappy, just playful and funny. I love it.

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Re: technicalities - mark/lexie - pg-13 slybrunette May 12 2009, 01:19:30 UTC
Aw you're so sweet! And believe me, I'll be writing a lot more. I've already gotten three done, and I'm working on a fourth.

And yes, Mark definitely has an ego, doesn't he? lol

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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