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Re: we're all trying to outrun something - Mark, Mark/Lexie, pg-15 littleone87 May 10 2009, 08:34:05 UTC
GAH!!!!!!! Are you kidding me? This is PERFECT!!!! I didn't have any expectation in mind. I just thought running and posted it!

The resulting heartbreak alone (and yeah, he does have a heart go figure)was enough to ward him off forever.
Oh my goodness. This line just kills me. Poor, sweet, Mark. Of COURSE he has a heart, and he got it broken so badly, why should he want to get into anything remotely romantic again?

Enough to send him running in the other direction whenever a situation arose that even looked like it was heading towards something even resembling commitment.

Beautiful. This is the best "running" response I could have asked for. Mark is always running in the other direction. He doesn't know how to have a steady and stable relationship. It's natural for him to run away.

but the sheer need to stay on equal footing with Derek is always going to be there.

Again, Poor Mark. Always comparing and trying to prove himself to be not that bad. Prove himself worthy. Especially to Derek.

After that first night, with his feet tangled with hers, her head on his chest, he’d said never again and mostly meant it.

Beautiful ending. He mostly meant it. If course he wanted more, and he deserves more. He deserves her.

Superb! COuldn't have asked for anything more. Thank you so much! =)

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