Drabble #1 - Beginnings

[sabriel_0405]

Title: Reality is never pretty
Word count: 200
Characters/pairings: Dolph
Challenge: #1 Beginnings
Author's note: Though this is far from my best drabble, I want to dedicate it to mhalachaiswords. In my opinion, Mhal set the standard to which the rest of us drabblers aspire. What she can do in 100 words a lot of published authors can’t do in a 1000. In a few

Comments

[sabriel_0405]

Glad you enjoyed it. I think Dolph is still walking that line. He, like Richard, can't understand how Anita could have compromised what they thought were her basic values. But I'm not certain that she has. The monsters are still the monsters. The one's she knows, however, are people and that makes all the difference.

[mhalachaiswords]

He never thought, never considered, what she might have to do to get that information.

Oh, *ouch*. The beginning of the end for Dolph and Anita. So amazing.

And you're making me blush. It's making me feel like a hack, what with this current dry spell. I should just suck it up and try to drabble :) What I mean to say is, thank you so much for your kind words :D

[lasairfhiona]

Great look into Dolph! He really is conflicted about Anita and his feelings for her before and after Jean-Claude.

[celeste_506]

Oh, very nice Jodi! Dolph's sentiments and internal anger in a neat drabble nutshell. Beautiful.