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FIC: Blocking the Sun's Glare

Aug 18, 2011 21:17

Title: Blocking the Sun's Glare
Author: bugs
Rating: MA
Genre: Romance, Smut, PWP
Word Count: 2,100
Summary: Building the cabin.

( Reading between the lines... )

by bugsfic, warning smut, prompt no 4: caprican

Comments 21

miabicicletta August 19 2011, 05:37:37 UTC

Oh, I was just thinking about how I hadn't seen anything from you in ages, bugs! So happy to see another of your lovely examinations of Colonial culture in a shippy (re: hawt) story!

He knew how he got when he was inebriated. He would have told her that he loved her in a flood of emotion, going into excruciating detail.

A very Bill observation, and an interesting one that never occurred to me before: that perhaps the real reason Bill didn't say anything on New Caprica was because he was afraid he would say too much.

So happy to see this pop up on my F-list!

bugsfic August 19 2011, 06:26:31 UTC

Okay, I see now that I write too much. :D I swear, it really hasn't been that long since I posted anything!

A very Bill observation, and an interesting one that never occurred to me before: that perhaps the real reason Bill didn't say anything on New Caprica was because he was afraid he would say too much.

I just always think of Bill's expression as he looks at Laura as she's stargazing; there's so much yearning there. I can easily imagine him chiding himself--don't say it, don't say it, don't say it...

bsg_aussiegirl August 19 2011, 08:51:12 UTC

Oh, that was lovely smut! I love when they yap, yap, yap during sex.

Actually, I think that brig thing might have happened. Okay, maybe just in my imagination. :) But this: That would have shown her for betraying him LOL!

I like the idea of Laura being protective of him. That comes full force in BOTS!

And I like the thought that he couldn't make love to her when he was stoned because he would have confessed way too much.

And I liked the ending! Him admitting (to himself at least) that he was Tauron.

bugsfic August 20 2011, 03:08:05 UTC

I love when they yap, yap, yap during sex.

Oh great. I was worried that Bill was thinking too much and now you've pointed out that they're both talking too much! *head, desk*

But this: That would have shown her for betraying him LOL!

I admit to a little snerk at Bill's expense. Poor guy just can't figure women out on some level.

I like the idea of Laura being protective of him.

I think that was consistent through the series. One of my favorite things of the Cain/Pegasus arc was how Laura was going to protect him, even if he wouldn't protect himself.

And I like the thought that he couldn't make love to her when he was stoned because he would have confessed way too much.

I always have fun playing with the idea that Bill's worried about talking too much. Mr. Stoic?

And I liked the ending! Him admitting (to himself at least) that he was Tauron.

Not quite sure how I made a fic about Capricans (Laura) about Bill. I guess because the whole Taurons as outcasts issue didn't play out on BSG, and I need to explain that.

akachankami August 19 2011, 12:54:02 UTC

he hadn't been able to get wood for a month. Guilt was the biggest cause of limp dick; life had taught him that.
OMGs!!!! bahahahahaha! XD sorry, i couldn't help the LOL
here you have a serious problem, bill =P less guilt and more action!

i obviously loved every line of it =) especially this: With a fingertip, he traced the symbol for life mate on the soft skin in the crease of her hip. Only he could read it. awwww ♥ thank you!

bugsfic August 20 2011, 03:10:32 UTC

It is mean of us to laugh at poor Bill and his angst, but it's so cute. :D

I wanted to have them saying one thing while a lot of unspoken communication is going on, such as writing the truth on each others skin. He can't read what Laura wrote, after all.

vash26 August 19 2011, 19:21:41 UTC

I havn't had time to read anything in weeks. This was such a treat.

As he tipped his hips and eased forward, he realized she could never be president again if he were to be the military leader. If she gave him that look in a meeting...

And he's absolutely right of course.

I love when they talk to each other like that. They could keep doing this all day long *happy sigh*

bugsfic August 20 2011, 03:15:50 UTC

Welcome back! Dive right into reading!

I love when they talk to each other like that. They could keep doing this all day long *happy sigh*

I didn't realize I wrote a thinking fic! At one point, I was worried I didn't have enough dialogue, but I must have finally gotten some in there! Glad you enjoyed it.

defyingnormalcy August 19 2011, 19:23:06 UTC

SO much to love about this fic. Some of my favourite moments:

He was in too good of a mood to be offended. Perhaps she was taking inventory of her new possession. He chuckled.

What a wonderfully amusing line. And also quite sexy - I love it when either Bill or Laura think of one another as theirs in fics.

He knew how he got when he was inebriated. He would have told her that he loved her in a flood of emotion, going into excruciating detail. As a stop-gap measure, he'd sang instead, forcing his tongue into unfamiliar movements to keep it from flapping.

(((BILL))) Awwww. <3 I love mushy!Bill. :P

He was immediately concerned. "Are you okay?"

Commence more Bill love.

With a fingertip, he traced the symbol for life mate on the soft skin in the crease of her hip. Only he could read it.

And just a little more Bill love. This is such a romantic, sexy,, gorgeous image. And I can SO see him doing this. I love that he thinks of her as his life mate. <3

He was a Tauron after all, writing their emotions on skin. ((((((BILL)))))) D ( ... )

bugsfic August 20 2011, 03:18:26 UTC

I think we have all the same push-buttons. I love Possessive!Bill/Laura, Romantic Fool!Bill, Deep and Abiding Love!Bill...All of their flavors!

I really adore how you've ended the fic with this notion. <3

Glad you liked the ending. I couldn't find one and just finally said, that's it! LOL!