If you have a bit of time I'd really like you all to read this and give me some feedback.  I know it's been a loooong wait but the completed story is now available.

She ran.  She had been running for what felt like days through the strangely empty canyons made by the glass and steel towers around her.  Still he kept up with her.  The pain in her ( Read more... )

the following is the next few paragraphs in my story that I posted the first bit ages ago.   LEAVE COMMENTS, please.

The walls of the hallway were white pained cnderblock, like a hospital or school.  The first door on the right in the short corridor had a plaque that read "Red Volge," Cassandra recognized it as an edgy, politically charged ( Read more... )

She ran.  She had been running for what felt like days through the strangely empty canyons made by the glass and steel towers around her.  Still he kept up with her.  The pain in her side and lungs was unbearable, but still she ran, her heart practically beating out of her chest.

“You can not outrun me you know, Cassandra,” he ( Read more... )