Dyatlov Pass Sequel - All Our Passing Nights [Chapter 5/?]

[x_carnivale_x]

Title: Dyatlov Pass - All Our Passing Nights.
Author: x_carnivale_x
Pairing: Ville/Bam, et all.
Rating: R/NC17. for mentions of sex, violence, gore, and horror.
Summary: That is not dead which can eternal lie. And with strange aeons, even death may die.
Author's Notes: So yeah, this chapter is a bit longer than the others, mostly because. Well, shit goes down

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[swirlsandstars]

(....I got a second FC on this???)

*goes to read*

[swirlsandstars]

(Okay first of all, leaning down to bet Uriel when he trotted up to them. Bam , did you mean 'pet'?)

Anways...

Until finally, he felt whatever it was was right next to him, scathingly whispering loudly into his ear.

"Poistaa."

I got total goosebumps there. Honestly. I actually shivered a bit, that's how creepy that part was.

And oh my god....

He heard his friends questioning him, questioning the sudden look on his face, but he didn't care. Without another thought he pressed select to open the message. It wasn't blank this time.

"My ears hurt. I can hardly hear."

There are actual tears in my eyes. Just...fuck. What can I even say to that? I'm always left completely stunned after I read this story and this chapter was no exception. Everything you write is so...haunting. I don't really know how to describe it. And yes, it came out more than alright. It was perfect, even if it did leave me feeling sort of numb from the shock

[snuggalicious]

I was sobbing at times,I had goosebumps as well.
The fear it gave me was a rush!

I want more of this story,yet I know that each chapter you post is one closer to ending the story. I don't want that either. :(

I am secretly hoping that Ville is still alive. Hunter is one special little boy.

[nodaybuttoday6]

This is amazing. End of story.
It just is.

Until finally, he felt whatever it was was right next to him, scathingly whispering loudly into his ear.
"Poistaa." - Freaked the crap out of me. Seriously creepy.

And my eyes went all huge when Hunter asked about "the pretty green eyed man."

"My ears hurt. I can hardly hear." I jumped when I read that.

This is definitely one of my favorite stories. <3

[calvaryscars]

Okay, I think it's time to properly tell you how brilliant you are.

I've always been a fan of horror films, novels, short stories, whatever, and this is up there with the haunting feeling of reading a good Edgar Allan Poe story. Super creepy, and super super eerie. It stays with you for a while after reading it.

There are so many lines/phrases that I love, so I'll just stick with saying the whole thing is fuckin' brilliant.

Amazing

[sadsong666]

I've read Dyatlov Pass and I was ecstatic to find that you had begun writing a sequel. I want to let you know that your are an amazing writer, with this story and the previous one. I feel everything that Bam feels, the sorrow of losing Ville and his fear and confusion with the texts that appear on his phone. And Hunter, who supposedly sees Ville, while no one else can.
This chapter gave me chills and brought tears to my eyes.
I feel especially sorry for Bam because none of his friends understand.
I don't know whether to think that Bam is actually insane, or something darker is happening.
Amazing story. Please update soon?