Dyatlov Pass Sequel - All Our Passing Nights [Chapter 5/?]

Aug 24, 2009 15:27

Title: Dyatlov Pass - All Our Passing Nights.
Author: x_carnivale_x
Pairing: Ville/Bam, et all.
Rating: R/NC17. for mentions of sex, violence, gore, and horror.
Summary: That is not dead which can eternal lie. And with strange aeons, even death may die.
Author's Notes: So yeah, this chapter is a bit longer than the others, mostly because. Well, shit goes down ( Read more... )

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swirlsandstars August 24 2009, 21:19:17 UTC
(Okay first of all, leaning down to bet Uriel when he trotted up to them. Bam , did you mean 'pet'?)

Anways...

Until finally, he felt whatever it was was right next to him, scathingly whispering loudly into his ear.

"Poistaa."

I got total goosebumps there. Honestly. I actually shivered a bit, that's how creepy that part was.

And oh my god....

He heard his friends questioning him, questioning the sudden look on his face, but he didn't care. Without another thought he pressed select to open the message. It wasn't blank this time.

"My ears hurt. I can hardly hear."

There are actual tears in my eyes. Just...fuck. What can I even say to that? I'm always left completely stunned after I read this story and this chapter was no exception. Everything you write is so...haunting. I don't really know how to describe it. And yes, it came out more than alright. It was perfect, even if it did leave me feeling sort of numb from the shock.

(And I will never stop 'digging' this xD)

((also, sorry if the comment didn't make much sense, I was writing it as I read at the same time))

<3

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