Love Story- Prologue

[stonecoldblood]

Title:Love Story
Written By: stonecoldblood
Warning: First vam ever! tell me what you think and what I can do to make it better.
Disclaimer:Everything but the story line
Summary: Ville was happy with Jake...that was untill Bam made his way into Ville's life. Now Ville has to find a way of being with Bam. However, Jake needs to be happy, or else his

Comments

[have_666_mercy]

Liking this. Please write more.

[x_eevie]

First of all, ur ville ava is gorgeous.
Second, I'm very interested to see where this goes, keep on writing :)

[musicophilia]

I don't want this to come across sounding bitchy, but can you change the red font? It's almost impossible to read on the grey background of __vam

[villegirl17]

this is awesome so far...keep going!