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My First One-shot

Dec 19, 2007 17:32

Author; Me, tia_maria_616
Chapter; 1/1
Rating; PG
Pairing; Vam, if you want it to be
Disclaimer; Do I even need one? I don't mention any names, plus I wrote it all :)

Warning; Sad, but not "it will make you cry" sad, I don't think.
Summary; How long will you cling on to love?

I really mean it when I say I welcome con-crit.

Will You Love Me If I Love You?

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Comments 15

kymburrlee December 19 2007, 18:05:21 UTC

Aww, sweetie. *huggles*
I really liked this.
You are right. This was sad because I can relate to some of it.
I'm so sorry this is such a lame comment but I have no con-crit for you and I just think it was probably very good for you to get everything out in this way.
♥

tia_maria_616 December 19 2007, 20:53:12 UTC

*huggles back and doesn't want to let go*
I think most people have some way to relate, that's why I wrote it like this.
It was good to write for me, yes. Thank you for reading and commenting ♥

jezebel1386 December 19 2007, 18:15:45 UTC

Thanks for the sadness warning: at least I was prepared!
You captured the emotion very well. I think we've all been there: watching a relationship fall apart and being helpless to stop it.
Loving someone and not having them love you back the way you want them to.
My only complaint is that there should have been more.

tia_maria_616 December 19 2007, 20:56:06 UTC

Wasn't really sad though, right?
Yup, I think we all probably have!
Thanks for reading and commenting, the length was just because I viewed it as more of a poem length, although it isn't a poem, but you know what I mean :)

midge62680 December 19 2007, 19:17:02 UTC

Lovely writing sweetheart; it was sad, but in a "dull aching" way.
In the beginning, I thought it was Bam talking, but when I got to "I find myself despising my own friends for being too close to him," I knew it had to be Ville!

*hugs*

tia_maria_616 December 19 2007, 20:57:17 UTC

Mmm, s'what I thought :)
You did? That's cool, I'm not sure who I thought it was when I wrote it.
Thanks for reading and commenting :D

lilafilly2 December 19 2007, 23:39:44 UTC

You try desperately to crush the little ice block that is my thumper, but I shan't let you!

Beautifully tragic.

tia_maria_616 December 20 2007, 13:12:43 UTC

Haha, sorry but be strong! :)

Thank you, and thanks for reading and commenting <3

slasher48 December 20 2007, 01:59:50 UTC

Ville wrote it. Fair-skinned. ;)

Another gem written by you, one of my favorite writers!

I love you for this. Your first one shot was amazing. Let us hope you write some more! :D

Cannot wait to see what you cook up next, whether with something like this or Babysitting or the Edward_Scissorhands one. :)

♥

tia_maria_616 December 20 2007, 13:11:22 UTC

Well done, just an observance test ;)

Aww, thank you Bun' :)

♥ It was all something I've just experienced, I just wanted to translate it to Vam in order to work it out.

Well...I can tell you that it shall be Edward ;) But I'm not sure how long away it will be, I've written some, but not enough.

Loves ♥

slasher48 December 22 2007, 00:24:39 UTC

*giggle* I win. ;)

You're so welcome, sweetheart.

♥ I'm glad you were able to. And did get Vam out of it. :)

SWEEET. I want to read some more of that SO FREAKING BAD. O.O

*makes face* I don't wish it to be long, please.

Loves you too ♥