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[myforgottenpain]

Title: Love On The Rocks
Author: myforgottenpain
Pairing: Vam
Rating: PG-13 Foul Language, Alcohol References, and adult situation.
Summary: Bam's new found friendship with Ville had made him question parts of his life he has long since repressed. Through an unexpected visit from the Finnish rock star, many bottles of beer, and a special tattoo;

Comments

[slasher48]

YAY! FC ON MY LOVE'S FICCIE! ♥

[myforgottenpain]

YAY you got the FC! Way to go!

[slasher48]

Yeah! Of course I did! :P

Thank you darling.

Now, for the analysis. Far less error than usual, by the way ;)

I did so LOVE this chapter. It's very adorable and the way they just kind of slide back into being together was rather ingenius.

For my favorite part, I think I'd choose this.

Bam assumed he was asleep and turned to leave. "Where are you going?" Ville asked softly, his eyes still closed.

Bam turned and faced him, scratching his arm. "I... I thought you were tired?"

"You look tired too.... come to bed." Ville replied replied, peeking at Bam.

Bam's heart was beating wildly in his chest. Had something so simple ever sounded so amazing? "Are you sure?"

Ville pulled the blanket and sheets back and indicated to the empty spot next to him. "Now."

And this.
Bam shrugged, "I needed something that tasted like you... and whiskey wasn't strong enough

[myforgottenpain]

Yay for finally getting a hang on all those stupid errors I make! I swear I make the dumbest mistakes ever in my writing.

lol... I'm glad that you liked that. I was a little worried that I had brought them back to easily. But I figure at this point they just want to be together again.

YAY for liking two of my favorite parts! I love the part about Bam and Ville going to bed. Bam's all like... I want to touch him but I dont want him to get pissed and leave. And Ville's all like... you in the bed... NOW.

LOL I really liked this part too. It really shows how much they need each other. That and its just cute.

Thank you so much! Sorry no smut right away. Soon though and trust me when I say... it will be well worth the wait. ^_~ Its hot... scorching hot in fact.

Love you too darling.

[xitangirl616]

aw this was such a great chapter. i almost had tears coming out of my eyes

[myforgottenpain]

~cuddles~ I'm glad that you liked it do much.

[blackcarnation]

wow. that was intense! How do you manage to make each chapter even more intense and fille with emmotion than the last? Actually I don't care as long as you keep doing it. I loved this chapter! loved, loved, loved! They're finally back together and there'll be happiness and fluff coming now wont there?

I don't know what to say about this chapter, it's just so amazing. It's perfect ^.^

Can't wait to see what comes next! Please update soon!

Talk to you later I hope. *hugs*

[myforgottenpain]

I really don't know. It just... is. I sit in class or walk down the street and BAM... it just hits me.

Yay for them being back together. Its still going to be slightly emotional... but things will definitely start becoming very happy and fluffy again. The next chapter is just going to be sheer humor.

Perfect? ~blushes~ You're too kind.

I can't want to update again too!

Of course! I love chating with you darling! ~hugs~

[meduusje]

i really have to get new tissues!
great writing!

[myforgottenpain]

awww ~gives you new tissues~

thank you!

[byond_redemptn]

...oh... it's beautiful....
so beautiful....

*is almost in tears*
they are perfect for each other...
why are you so good?

ah
so beautiful...

xXx

[myforgottenpain]

awww thank you...

~hugs~ no more tears! Be happy!

They really are.... there is no denying it.

I don't know... hehehehe... I just lucked out I guess.

~hugs~

p.s. I forgot to say this the last time you commented. But I wuv your Frankie avatar. So cute.

[byond_redemptn]

you're welcome sweetheart.

okei... *wipes away tears*

*nods* no denying it...

...*ponders*
well what ever higher being there is... they obviously want you to do some great things with that gift...
*shakes self*
okei.. that was weird =S =D

*hugs back*
*giggles*
thankies!!
my friend made it for me..
isn't he adorable?!?!

[myforgottenpain]

lol... thats alright... it wasn't awkward weird. In fact, I will take it as compliment. Now if I could only figure out a way to make money off my fandom. XDDD lol j/k I would like to work on a book of my own personal characters and storyline and everything. But I haven't worked out all the details yet.

That was so nice of your friends. I wish I could make icons... heheheh...

He is fucking adorable!

~hugs the Frankie~