Titanic: Chapter Six

[valosdarling]

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It was nearly 2pm, and Bam hadn’t seen Ville. Not that he’d been looking that hard, how hard could you look for a first class citizen on a ship who was allowed into so many more places than you? He’d resorted to planting himself on the bench near the back of the ship, pulling out a book he’d found under an abandoned sun chair, and

Comments

[yellay_27]

awwww poor bammie!!!!! this story is getting so good!!! i love it! every time i see a new chapter for this i literally bounce up and down and clap my hands!! its a really great story! more soon? : ]

[yellay_27]

hey! FC!! i havent got one of those in a while!

[valosdarling]

congratulations on the FC! *dances around with cookies and popcorn* and darling, i am SO very glad you love this story! I love it too, i must say ^_^ and i am just so happy you are getting as much joy out of it as me! More soon as always love!

[yellay_27]

yay!!! cookies and popcorn!!! lol
i always thought this would make a good vam story. im so happy someone's doing it! and oh so well : )

[chibodeh]

This is really awesome, and attention grabbing.. and good for something of this nature (no offense.) I usually don't even read anything thats more than a chapter, since its hard to keep my overactive ADD mind focused. But this is excellent.

[valosdarling]

i'm so happy you like it! what a nice compliment to know i can tame your add for even a brief period ^_^ i hope you stick around for more!

[chibodeh]

I most definantly will.

[midget666]

Yay! Another chapter! Totally made my day lol! Can't wait for what's next! Great chapter!

[valosdarling]

thank you thank you thank you darling! more soon i promise love!!

[kymburrlee]

Oh I love this story!
Poor Bammie! Poor Willa!
Can't wait for the next chapter!

[valosdarling]

poor everyone!! i know!! more soon my love!!

[myforgottenpain]

Sorry I didn't comment sooner. I was saving this for this morning. I wanted something to look forward to getting out of bed for. If this couldn't brighten my spirits before a Physics lab... then nothing could!

As always you did a wonderful job. There is a real human element at play here and I mean that honestly. Its not over done and yet not under done either. Its simple and elegant and feels like honest heart break.

Love it!

I cant wait to read more... <3

[valosdarling]

i'm so flattered my darling, what a wonderful comment! I'm always glad to hear that my writing is coherent and hasn't gone off the deep end quite yet XD there will be more, MORE!! soon. ^___^