For A Friend of Mine

[4shatteredstars]

Roads Never Traveled

I've buried my heart beneath the highway

Lost between those endless lines

There's tar sticking in this throat

Yellow, white dripping reflections

Falling from my bruising body

And though you've tried to hold me (countless times)

The distance between us

Its going to choke me

Comments

[sundayschild]

WHY YOU GOTTA WRITE SO GOOD THO

MAKIN' ME FEEL INADEQUATE AND SHIT

:|||

(lol jk, jk. this is awesome though. js. ♥)

[goodconceited]

Wow. Those first three lines, especially, struck me as very good. (I know this is cheap as critiques or responses go, because "I like it" isn't much to give back to a writer, but I really like it. ;D )