Fandom 18 - Torchwood

Mar 14, 2009 20:00

[Title] Drained
[Fandom] Torchwood
[Rating] PG
[Notes/Summary] Ficlet about Gwen's reaction to the events of They Keep Killing Suzie. Thanks to rushikayu13 for the inspiration.

She was so tired )

torchwood, versipellis

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anbyrobanby March 15 2009, 01:20:16 UTC
Ouch, this is creepy. I can imagine Gwen reliving the feeling of dying over and over again in her head... and the words you used to describe her here is really atmospheric. It's cold, and really suggests she feels used and dirty, and you can feel how haunted she must be by the experience.

Good one!

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versipellis March 15 2009, 18:53:55 UTC
Thank you very much! ^__^

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lslaw March 15 2009, 06:58:00 UTC
That seems... right. Certainly more so that what'sisface ascending unto the light in random shoes.

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versipellis March 15 2009, 18:54:32 UTC
Well, the ascending-into-the-light stuff doesn't really fit with the tone of the episode anyway, so I went more for the darkness angle ^^

Thank you for your comment!

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sabethea March 22 2009, 18:22:00 UTC
Ooh *shivers*

Don't know the episode, but knowing Dr Who and Torchwood, I can imagine my own horrors out there.

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versipellis March 22 2009, 19:34:12 UTC
Thank you for shivering ^^

I'm sure you can. This one was actually kind of twisted ^^

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lycoris March 27 2009, 00:20:08 UTC
Oh, that was brilliant and creepy. Poor Gwen. I loved the quick, anxious toe wriggling. Awesome.

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versipellis March 27 2009, 20:07:57 UTC
I found this one hard to write so I'm glad you liked it! Thanks ^^

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