I love you so much. This story just keeps getting deeper, better, more satisfying with each chapter.
I want you to know that the exposition of House and Cameron's points of view was exquisite. You managed to convey so beautifully what HER fears of him not returning his love are and juxtaposed then nicely with House's fears of being betrayed again preventing him from returning the sentiment. And the BEST part of the whole thing is knowing how far this story has come. Cameron didn't act like a petulant child. She just understood and gave him space. And I love that House took it, no exceptions. They've come so far. In past instances, she would have stonewalled him with her expectations and he would have become defensive. Yet, it doesn't feel sudden, just that they've slowly but surely become comfortable with each other. And you even made the reader feel like it's not SO far away, him returning her affections.
The bike scene was perfection. Her commentary was priceless. It's pretty! LOL, I love Cameron!
In short, this story is a huge treat for me, and I squeal a little every time you update. ♥
Okay josvg...nothing I can write here can tell you how much I needed your comments. I was just talking to bmax when they came in and telling her I was losing steam and the readers were losing interest. Then this...gah! Thank you so much for taking the time to give such indept feedback.
I'm glad you enjoyed the first half of the chapter...I'm such an introspective sap...I loved writing that. lol And I'm glad you seemed to get out of it exactly what I was trying to put into it! :)
I love you so much. This story just keeps getting deeper, better, more satisfying with each chapter.
I want you to know that the exposition of House and Cameron's points of view was exquisite. You managed to convey so beautifully what HER fears of him not returning his love are and juxtaposed then nicely with House's fears of being betrayed again preventing him from returning the sentiment. And the BEST part of the whole thing is knowing how far this story has come. Cameron didn't act like a petulant child. She just understood and gave him space. And I love that House took it, no exceptions. They've come so far. In past instances, she would have stonewalled him with her expectations and he would have become defensive. Yet, it doesn't feel sudden, just that they've slowly but surely become comfortable with each other. And you even made the reader feel like it's not SO far away, him returning her affections.
The bike scene was perfection. Her commentary was priceless. It's pretty! LOL, I love Cameron!
In short, this story is a huge treat for me, and I squeal a little every time you update. ♥
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I'm glad you enjoyed the first half of the chapter...I'm such an introspective sap...I loved writing that. lol And I'm glad you seemed to get out of it exactly what I was trying to put into it! :)
Anyway...thanks again!! :)
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