Keep Me Close- chapter XVIII

[revuko]

Team: San Jose Sharks
Pairing: Joe Thornton/Evgeni Nabokov
Rating: R

Summary: Not all in San Jose is sunny as the path to the Stanley Cup proves to be as difficult as ever; falling in love might be the simplest task on this year’s agenda.

Editor: Sherlockelly

Chapter I | Chapter II | Chapter III | Chapter IV | Chapter V | Chapter VI | Chapter VII |

Comments

[stayxwithxyou]

*steals first comment*

kay, time to go read <3

[revuko]

:O woman, you crazy!

But I love you for it <3

[stayxwithxyou]

=) Well, they do say first is the best... wait shit. No thats worst. Fuck. Oh whatever, first is first!

Anyways, onto the important stuff. Ah, this chapter was amazing as they all are. I love the way you write Joe and Evgeni, and I love all of the emotion that just oozes from each and every chapter. Every single time you update I feel all happy inside even though sometimes the content is complete and utter heartbreak. Is that kind of sadistic? Oops.

Joe, I have a bone to pick with you! >.< Why can't these boys just understand that along with hurting themselves, they're hurting us too?!? But gah, so much emotion and love here and I just want to smoosh them together and make it all better. FIX IT JOE, RIGHT NOW. Hahah

[revuko]

ASFGHDJFKSAJSHDGAGHJ *melts*

Have I mentioned how much I love your comments? Because I do. I truely do.

Lol sadistic? I wouldn't call it that... if only for the fact that I love the heartbreak stuff too :)

Why can't they just figure out that they were made for each other? Because they're boys. And not only that, they're hockey boys. So complicated, ugh!

Oh and the star scene! *sigh* I can probably write that because I feel pretty much the same way. And I've been so sad lately that I haven't been able to see them, from the pollution, or lights, or clouds. But then I thought of Joe, and the fact that he gets to see them all the time from above the clouds, a perfect view just for those who take advantage of it :)
That part wasn't actually written until 5 minutes before I posted this too, haha. Now I'm very glad that I added it!

Yes. Well. that's all there is! Thank you sosososososooooo much for your wonderful reviews, each and every single time!

[that_flies]

“Fuck you Joe!"

NOOOOO. ;_; DON'T DO IT NABBY. He just broke my heart. :/

But AW SETO! He made me laugh. XD
“I’ve been working on them! Come on, don’t laugh, Joe!”

[revuko]

It had to happen! I'm sorry! *hides*
They just can't seem to go through a full 3 chapters before something bad happens between them again :(

BUT I loved writing the Seto part. There's this one chapter with him that I am soooo excited to write. You'll just have to wait and read it when it comes out!

And thanks as always for the review!

[sherlockelly]

YOUR MOOD AND MY MOOD ARE THE SAME!

Also, I LOVE THIS! You already know that because I constantly fawn over the Seto scene. Why oh why is that boy such a wonderful little manwhore?!

I don't know what else to say that won't give anything away to people reading my review so I'll just say this: GUH! JOE! LOOK WHAT THE HELL YOU DID!

[revuko]

AND NOW I'M EATING PIE. WTF.

:P and thank you a million times over for everything! The Seto scene was fun to write, mostly because of the fact that he is a manwhore. Yay!

SERIOUSLY JOE. STOP MAKING YEVI FEEL BAD ABOUT HIMSELF.
He should make it up by having sex with him in the sauna.
Or on the ice :3

Just some ideas to think on ;)

[suicidal_knife]

Ahhhh this was pure awesome. I loved it!

[revuko]

:) thank you!!

[revuko]

fighting, yes. Progress, yes!
Devin = manwhore, yes forever. Like, you have no idea XD

Thanks for the review, as always!