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The Twelve Days Of Christmas

Dec 02, 2009 14:23

Title: The Twelve Days of Christmas
Author: adrenalin211
Rating: Um R? Idk. There’s some sex. What does that make it?
Characters: Jack, Renee, Kim, Stephen, Baby Teri
Summary: It was winter and it was cold. Jack and Renee were there. A lonely grey couch. “Oh look!” cried Teri. And then the kingdom was hers forever. The end. (Well not really. But ( Read more... )

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leigh57 December 2 2009, 19:28:11 UTC

*points to icon*

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!

I heart you and am so proud of you for posting this.

It was December and it was freakin' frigid. Shana and Adrienne were there. An epic confidence crisis. “Oh look!” cried Yoda. And then the kingdom was theirs forever. The end.

adrenalin211 December 2 2009, 20:10:48 UTC

EEE! THANK YOU for all of your help posting this. I appreciate so much and feel so much more LJ knowledgeable.

I love your story. It's almost as good as Chandler's. Almost.

leigh57 December 2 2009, 20:58:02 UTC

My story is much better than Chandler's. Because Chandler is dumb. The end:-P But I just read this again and squeaked. I'd review for real but I have kids yelling and my contact has decided to mutiny. Blah. I'm still so happy you put this up though. It's making me die for S8 and Grandpa!Jack. Ahem. Among other things. Ahem more.

leigh57 December 4 2009, 00:51:19 UTC

Shut up, Shana. You're dumb. Okay. Really reading now.

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marinw December 2 2009, 22:18:54 UTC

Loved this:

Her stomach’s like frenzied fireflies in some jar, wanting nothing more than to find the air-hole and breathe.

It's perfect how Jack is clueless in a department store.

I am SO pumped that this little comm has a new writer. Hope to read more from you.

adrenalin211 December 2 2009, 23:30:48 UTC

Thanks so much for welcoming me. I haven't written anything in a LONG time, so thanks so much for commenting.

leigh57 December 3 2009, 14:04:14 UTC

Sooooooooooooo I don't even know where to start, because I'm so excited you posted this in the first place and every time I read the first or the last bits I get so distracted my brain doesn't work. Fail. hehehehehe. Anyway. Ahem. I'll try though? First I have to say that it's amusing to beta someone and constantly have to say, "That's much too poetic. Please take it out." You're the only person for whom I've ever had to do that. LOL. Okay so anyway. If I say everything I love about this, I'll be here until 2012 and the aliens will come, so I'm going to make a list. Word ( ... )

adrenalin211 December 3 2009, 20:55:37 UTC

:) First, I have to say THANK YOU so so much for all the help, both with editing and posting. The technical help was epic and above and beyond and just! You're the best ( ... )

lind_saay December 3 2009, 14:35:02 UTC

I like when you write things, even when they are for TV shows I have never watched :)

adrenalin211 December 3 2009, 20:26:55 UTC

Lol! I appreciate it. Thanks for reading. :)

anne63 December 3 2009, 19:26:42 UTC

very nice story and i am very glad that you posted this story too. i am myself in the beginning stages of writing a story with jack and renee in it (but it is the very very biginning stages so it will be awhile before i write in here. thanks again for a great story.

adrenalin211 December 3 2009, 20:29:13 UTC

Thanks so much for the comment! I'm very interested to see your story! Keep writing :)