Ouran Host Club, Kyouya Ootori x Tamaki Suoh

[kay_cricketed]

Fandom: Ouran Host Club
Pairing: Kyouya Ootori x Tamaki Suoh
Theme Set: Epsilon
Rating: PG-13

Comments

[lirren]

God, that was beautiful! I especially liked #'s 8, 9, 10, 18 and 27. But my absolute favorite was this: Tamaki’s keeping track of how many times a day he can get Kyouya to actually laugh, for real, but so far the record is one. That is so completely something I would see Tamaki doing, and a bittersweet truth about Kyouya.

Beautiful set. Thanks for sharing them!

[kay_cricketed]

*flushes hotly* Thank you... your comments are so kind. And here I was so terribly nervous about writing in a new fandom for me. XD I'm so happy you enjoyed it!

(I secretly adore #27. Should it ever happen, I suspect the Coast Guard will become suspicious of the blinding sparkles shooting out of the ocean and have to rescue him.)

Poor Kyouya needs to smile more. TAMAKI, GET AN APRON AND START MOTHERING MOTHER. ♥

Thank you again for the wonderful feedback! :D

[cheloya]

A lot of these are so beautiful that they just defy my attempts to flail and wibble about them - you've done such a wonderful job. I think my favourites were #5, #11 and #35.

And #27, because it's just so true. XD;

[kay_cricketed]

*blushes hotly* Really? Thank you so much! I was so worried because it was my first wibbly attempt to write anything Ouran. x_x Am so very relieved they pass the test.

Waah, thank you so much. ♥

And #27, because it's just so true. XD;

I maintain that should anyone ever attempt to bury Tamaki in the Marianna Trench in a burlap sack covered in black cement, he would still sparkle like the freakin' New Year Ball's love child. Ten seconds, rescue would come.

[marion517]

The second half of the first line was just so Ouran, it hooked me completely. ♥ You did an absolutely goregeous job on these. I love how it all goes in a kind of sequence, little bits of a greater story (at least, that's how I see it). I reached the end and was torn between squee-ing at the happy ending, and wanting more.

#46 was my favorite, because it's just Tamaki-in-a-nutshell, #3 made me go aww and #1 made me laugh.

Think about posting a link to here from ouranhostclub, maybe? It's a decently sized community, and you need more coverage of this lovely thing!

[kay_cricketed]

Thank you so much for the kind feedback! ♥ It completely made my morning, I have to admit. This is my first Ouran piece, so I was a bit concerned about how well it turned out.

Hah hah, I know what you mean-- I wanted to write more after the ending. XD If it makes you feel better, I wanted to add an alternative #51 sentence to conclude:

And then there was smut. Happy smut.

Well, I'm sure there was. Pfft. Anyway, I'm so happy you liked #46, too, it was one of my favorites. :D Thank you, thank you!

(I've never posted in many other communities, but I'll give it a look and see if it seems like a nice place. Can't hurt, certainly. Thanks for the head's up!)

[fenetre_cassee]

One, Now and Fool were my favourite. I love this set, it's my favourite and you've made it work so well with TamakixKyouya. Your Kyouya was especially commendable, very in character and believable and hot. <3

I really loved it and am currently in a fuzzy bubble of happy.