Surrender

Jul 17, 2012 10:54

Title: Surrender
Author: 123cariad
Characters: Noah Mayer & Dr Reid Oliver
Rating: Nc17
Word Count: 2,345 One Shot
Disclaimer: ATWT characters are owned by Telenext; no copyright infringement intended.
Beta: 123cariad. all mistakes are mine and only mine
Artist: Me hope you like
Warnings: M/M SEX ,small amount of blindfold use , and ice cubes ( Read more... )

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Comments 16

valenti1965 July 17 2012, 11:01:52 UTC
I would surrender also!!! Omfgg Stella...that was hot as f**k!!!!

Wow...Noah is a very sensual lover indeed. No wonder Reid want to love him for the rest of his life.

Love the artwork..there is just something about there two men which gets the creative juices flowing....thank god!

Totally totally adored it!!! Well done...and hope you do more artwork which inspires you very soon! xxx

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123cariad July 17 2012, 11:20:47 UTC
Louise your support with every story I write is priceless , I thank you for being there with your confidenc and advice ..

I am so happy you enjoyed this little story it been sitting in my docs for so long now and over the week end it just shouted out to be finished it must have been all that sea air lol

Thank you xx

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jeb423 July 17 2012, 17:57:57 UTC
Damn it woman you know how to make a one-shot so f***in HOT! I knew you could do this! Fantastic job cariad!

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123cariad July 17 2012, 18:41:55 UTC
Aww Jenn Diolch , your comment is wonderful xx

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jeri_1116 July 18 2012, 07:42:42 UTC
I loved this little piece. I mean there were so many parts I enjoyed, but I thought I'd spare myself with the looking crazy and such drama and just pick one.

I know he’s nervous , I can hear the tremor in his voice , I know every note , every tone of that voice , this is a first for him , it’s a first for us , fuck ! it’s a first for me, I haven’t let anyone do this since my college days . My nerves are well hidden behind that emotional wall I build so well.. Every day, every hour, every minute, every second Noah is removing that wall brick by God damn brick, I feel myself crumble.

Look Stella, I never wanna read the words, I don't know if I am as good as the other's from you ever again. Shit I don't know if you even said that or implied it but all I know is you IS AMAZING BB. This was perfectly done. I am a little jealous, because you are giving me a run for my money when it comes to Neid stories. But please and I mean please do give us more, if you ever get in the mood too do so. ;)

Great one shot.

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123cariad July 18 2012, 08:26:29 UTC
This is such a lovely comment , thank you so much I really think it my British attitude we really do not know how to give our selves credit and I always been full of self doubt , from like forever lol . I will try really hard to have more confidence in my writing with all you wonderful Neiders/Nukies on my side I know I will get there THANK YOU XXX

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wheelie47 July 18 2012, 09:41:19 UTC
*THUD* That was stunning Stella. Loved it. Your description of Reid's needs and wants was spot on. I felt like I was in the room with them!

So intense and oh so perfect. Loved it!!

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wheelie47 July 18 2012, 09:42:02 UTC
Oh and I adore the artwork!!

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123cariad July 18 2012, 10:48:37 UTC
These two certainly are two hot models to work with lol

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123cariad July 18 2012, 10:47:48 UTC
Thank you for such a lovely comment so happy that the feelings played across so well xx

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seajellybaby July 18 2012, 12:45:14 UTC
Hot and naughty and heartfelt all at once! Nice job!

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123cariad July 18 2012, 17:06:33 UTC
Thank you so much for your comment, so happy you enjoyed it x

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