Tomorrow is never promised .... Neid Lil Big Bang 2013

[123cariad]

Title: Tomorrow is never Promised
Author: 123cariad
Characters: Noah Mayer & Dr Reid Oliver
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,293 approx : One Shot
Disclaimer: ATWT characters are owned by Telenext; no copyright infringement intended.
Beta: random_nic .. Thank you Nic for you help xx And for using that big stick who knew it could reach across the pond .. I'm

Comments

[jb1183]

Stella,
You have such a wonderfully unique style of writing that I would know this was written by you even if I didn't see your name. Your writing is like poetry, the words put together in a way that evokes such strong emotions in the reader. I must confess that I wiped away a few tears while reading this, so moved by your beautiful words.

My favorite passage:

"His hand looks so small, so delicate nestled deep within my palm. Pale... cold… still... childlike. The exact opposite to what I remember - to what I know his hands to be.

His hands are meant to be warm, soft, rough, expressive, sensual.

"His hands have the ability to map my body like an explorer. His fingertips easily circumnavigate every curve, every line, every inch of my skin. Recording every detail, setting each of my nerves on fire...

He is a maestro, and his hands are the baton. My body is his orchestra.

His hands can play my body like a musical instrument, fingers strumming their way slowly and confidently along, fine tuning every inch of my skin.
His hands are not meant to be unmoving, lifeless - still.

His hand that I now hold so desperately within my grasp is the hand I know I'll be holding on to for the rest of my life and beyond, never letting go again - if only he can forgive me.

If only he would wake up."

Because it is so good it deserves to be quoted in full.

You're brilliant, Stella! :)

[123cariad]

Jim I am so touched by your wonderful comment thank you thank you for reading and leaving this amazing comment xx