He's Good (One-shot)

May 06, 2009 20:50

The music’s playing.

People are yelling. Calling out his name.

He steps onto the stage, skin tingling under the heavy weight of a hundred pairs of eyes.

One step forward, body unfurling smoothly.

The crowd goes wild. Calling for more.

He smirks slightly, lifts his hand and lets it run the course of his thigh, pulling over his abdomen to expose a tease ( Read more... )

one-shot, yunho

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menhet May 7 2009, 05:47:40 UTC
Oh Andy, you totally killed me! (yes, dead people can type)

I was captivated by the description, especially this:
"This is why he does it. The power of seduction is amazing, and he knows how to control it. His body is a sacred ground that only few have ever experienced. He is the master of music and the sultry deity of desire. He is lustful perfection incarnate." - dear girl, you're amazing...and im not gonna stop praising you 'cause i like it!

Then BANG "Well that was the last time he ever ate ice-cream before going to bed." DEAD! Ha ha ha ha , what a happy way to start an annoying day.
Thank you!

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0_andy_0 May 7 2009, 14:35:25 UTC
Ah, you're way to nice to me!
I hardly think I'm that amazing, but if you think so...
Well, I can't just sit here and let you smother me with praise. I have to praise you back. I can't wait for another chapter of Hunting Love!

Thank you for the lovely comment!

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menhet May 7 2009, 16:22:13 UTC
I mean it when i say i love it. *cheers for Andy*
And you seem an interesting person that totally deserve to be praised - because your writing is amazing. I love this dark ...sometimes sadistic, style of yours.
And this one has crack too.
Andy, in this moment i hate my exams more than ever 'cause i can't read more T__T

(Really, when i think about 'Hunting Love' i wonder what did i get myself into?!? I know it will be a total failure. I feel like running away and hide in the desert..And i really don't deserve to be praised...i'm not looking for this when i say what i think about your fics- God, i'm paranoid now- the level of stress is high in the sky)

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0_andy_0 May 11 2009, 00:51:14 UTC
Well, you seem like a fairly interesting person yourself ( ... )

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andraangel5 May 7 2009, 06:42:29 UTC
omg! i was wondering if that little performance will inspire such writings!

this was great! i was really longing to read something like this!

this is so true, i think he absolutely knows what he's doing:
"He wants them to envy that poll with their entire soul. He wants their minds blown by the picture of his beauty and grace."

and the ending...lol! now i have a great picture in my mind with sweaty yun and ice cream ^____^

thank you so much for writing this!
i loved it! <3

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0_andy_0 May 7 2009, 14:42:27 UTC
Ha, I thought there would be as lot more written about his "dancing". I nearly died when I saw the video. It's almost, almost, as good as the YooSuMin counting. Oh, I gotta write a Yunjae one-shot about the counting -nodnod-

I really wanted to read something like this, too, but I couldn't find it anywhere, so I just decided to write it on my own.

I know he knows what he's doing. Sexy beast feeling up the microphone stand, giving fangirls joygasms.

Mmm, ice cream is my favorite Yunho topping. That, and chocolate.

Ha, thank you for reading and commenting!

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catgirl50001 May 7 2009, 18:38:41 UTC
O_O ice cream!! need ice cream now! wanna be in yunhos dream too! pwwwwwwweeeeeeeeaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeee!

love you soooooooooooooooo much!

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0_andy_0 May 11 2009, 00:52:43 UTC
That's what I was thinking after I wrote this. I was like: "I think I'll eat some ice cream at twelve and then read this one-shot before I go to bed. Maybe I'll get lucky"
I don't think it would have worked -_-

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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dark_hunterjenn May 7 2009, 22:18:05 UTC
This tore me up! I was expecting all "sexy time" and then BAM! LOL, that was awesome!

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0_andy_0 May 11 2009, 00:53:45 UTC
Ha, I couldn't bring myself to finish writing the stripping scene. I knew it would ruin the entire flow if I started writing a detailed stripping scene. So I just ended it there with a funny sort of ending. I'm glad that you liked it!

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raindrop_symph May 8 2009, 07:13:01 UTC
wow..
very good descriptions on how Yunho was dancing..
I could totally imagin it in my mind..
Yunho so hot..
Ha-ha..
Funny ending..
Like it..
^-^

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0_andy_0 May 11 2009, 00:55:08 UTC
Thank you!
I took some of his dance moves from the actual video. Like when he turns his back on the pole and slides downwards. Yeah. And the part where he tips his head back...that was my favorite part. I have this jaw-line obsession.

Glad you liked it!

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