He's Good (One-shot)

[0_andy_0]

The music’s playing.

People are yelling. Calling out his name.

He steps onto the stage, skin tingling under the heavy weight of a hundred pairs of eyes.

One step forward, body unfurling smoothly.

The crowd goes wild. Calling for more.

He smirks slightly, lifts his hand and lets it run the course of his thigh, pulling over his abdomen to expose a tease

Comments

[0_andy_0]

Well, you seem like a fairly interesting person yourself.
Ha, I guess I just write dark stories better. I'm terrible at writing fluff. It never comes out right.
Aw, exams suck. So much pressure to do good. I'm glad mine are already over. Unfortunately, my Summer semester begins tomorrow. -Sigh-

Aw don't stress over "Hunting Love". My suggestion to you would be to know exactly how you want the story to end, maybe pick out four or five big events that need to happen to lead up to that ending. You've got a really good beginning on your hands and I want to encourage you to keep writing. I mean, just looking at the prologue, you've got at least three things you can work with. One: Who is Jaejoong (his back story and everything that happened before he was left in the desert ) Two: Changmin's story (what happened to him before he captured Jaejoong) Three: Why are Jaejoong and Changmin fighting? How do they know each other. Four: How did Jaejoong lose his memory?

But aside from all of that, you really have to know where your story is going to end. What's the purpose? Is it for Jaejoong and Changmin to end up reconciling their differences and falling in love? Then work your plot around that. I've had my ending scene for Soul's Requiem planned out since the beginning of my story. That's how I'm able to stay so focused. The more structure and planning you can do for your story, the easier it's going to be to write it. If you need any help at all with plotting or planning, please don't hesitate to send me a message, I would love you help in whatever way I can.

[menhet]

Alright, i'll try not to be (too) dramatic, but i don't know if you realize how much this means to me!
This is the best advice someone gave me and you were so kind to offer your help!

OK..i tried but still T__T
Thank you!
You are my sensei!
I'll never forget this!
Love you Andy!

[0_andy_0]

I don't mind offering my help at all. I know starting a new story can be a bit daunting at first. I felt that way with SR when I got started. I kept wondering what in the world I'd gotten myself into. But as soon as I really started planning everything out, I realized that I was totally capable of making everything work together.
So don't stress it too much. That'll only give you writer's block.

Aw, I love you too!