Guh, very hot in the beginning. Lovely. The first line drew me in, needless to say.
And then we get to the part where she kills him (poor, poor Zuko) and I went, "...well, fuck, I wish we could have had some sort of angsty, desperate hate!sex before he died somehow," but no matter. It was still very nice.
See, I was thinking about the hate!sex but I'm pretty sure I don't write smut very well, although I read it. It took me forever to get the hotness! in the beginning anyway... Thanks (:!
I will! I'm typing up Chapter One of my story Fire Lilies right now, in fact. (: You may want to check out the intro. Its somewhere in my mass of LJ posts....
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And then we get to the part where she kills him (poor, poor Zuko) and I went, "...well, fuck, I wish we could have had some sort of angsty, desperate hate!sex before he died somehow," but no matter. It was still very nice.
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Thanks (:!
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Keep writing!
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I'm typing up Chapter One of my story Fire Lilies right now, in fact. (: You may want to check out the intro. Its somewhere in my mass of LJ posts....
*prods post conspicuously* XD
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I seriously think I'm going to write a hate!sex drabble now.
You've got my tiny mind turning over the incredibly hot!possibilities.
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