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[blonde_warning]

The next three pieces are a follow up to Storm. It would probably help to read that first, if you haven't already. Think of this as a miniseries. Comments and concrit are, as always, encouraged.  And, as usual, my font is all screwed up.  >_<

Author: blonde_warning
Prompt: #57 - Strangers
Word Count: 210
Rating: PG

“Unbelievable,” he mutters to

Comments

[thisisme_deal17]

Wow! I loved them all. ^-^
Hopefully Zuzu will come around in time?

[geekyxgirl]

I thought they were all great! You managed to describe their dire situation with such simplicity, and you kept Zuko in character the entire time. I especially loved "Blanket"; it made me go from frowning to smiling within seconds.

I only noticed one teensy mistake.

"She sits down besides the fire and breaks the bed in two ..." I think you meant bread? Just thought I'd let you know. =)

[blonde_warning]

Thank you! I never get anything beta'd. XD

[geekyxgirl]

Same! And after a while you just get too lazy to read over it yourself.

[room___service]

Ahh, how I love the cliche blanket concept. So overused and yet it never gets old.

[blonde_warning]

Of course. It's my favorite. Although, I have to say, I'm a little disappointed with myself. I wanted to do something totally creative and never-seen-before with the blanket thing. Maybe I'll redo it later. ^_^

[room___service]

Ahaha, quite all right. xD

[honestly_sangi]

Very nice. This is normally where I would insert my favorite part, but it's New Years.

(Which is my way of saying that it was all my favorite.)

[romanitas]

Tee hee hee hee~
No matter how often I read the classic blanket scenario, I never seem to tire of it.

I lol'd when she ordered him to boil the water. Snerk.

Love this series. Can't wait to read the rest! ^_^