FIC: White Shroud (3/20) T

[zeldaophelia]

Title: White Shroud, Chapter 3
Author: Zelda Ophelia (zeldaophelia)
Fandom/Character: CSI:NY; Stella, Angell, Flack
General info: Not mine; T.
Content: Later chapters include discussion of sexual violence.
Notes:Written for the csi_bigbang challenge. Big thanks to E for the beta. This fic can be considered a sequel to Titania Falling
Summary: When the flu bug hits the

Comments

[swfc008]

I really, really & hearts the scene between Flack/Jess!!! Their flirtatious banter and everything about them is just &hearts :)

"If that isn't desecration, I don't know what is."
Poor Flack. You know it's really, really bad when it's coming from Flack's mouth.

"The team, coach and assistants, managers--oh and the owner's assistant who would really like for you to get this cleaned up so the team can come back in here when first period is over." Flack grinned at the look that crossed Mac's face.

For some reason, this line made me crack up so much coz I totally imagined Mac giving the raised eyebrow look at Flack and Flack giving his trademark grin when saying it.

Can't wait for the next chapter! ^^

[zeldaophelia]

YAY! I'm glad you liked it! I love the banter between Flack and Angell, it's one of my favorite things about them and one of my favorite things to write.

The desecration line was actually one of the first lines written in the fic - back when I was still plotting it out. I knew that it was something Flack would have to say. ;)

:)) That is exactly the kind of look I was imagining as well. :D

The next chapter should go up this afternoon. :D