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kilodalton September 4 2011, 13:52:01 UTC
Beautiful use of a beautiful line! =D

I love the ten lives, ten toes part too! =D

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zazie11 September 5 2011, 06:09:26 UTC
Hehehe - you know I've been waiting to tack that to something, and this seemed just right. Glad you liked the line about the ten lives/toes.

You are my sunshine, my only sunshine ... :D

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akkajemo September 4 2011, 17:48:10 UTC
I like the 'mental painting' you do in your stories, finding and using words that sound instantly cozy, like "jammie bread nibbles", "nestled" and "sun-kissed toes". Instant peaceful and relaxed mental setting, a perfect moment captured in such few lines. :D

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zazie11 September 5 2011, 06:14:44 UTC
Thank you so much, bb! I'm glad that you felt that it was 'cozy,' as that is exactly what I was going for. :D :D

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zazie11 September 8 2011, 03:49:10 UTC
Thanks, bb!

I literally just got home from Canada (well, 12 hours in the car later :P), and this was the first thing I saw! :D

Glad you liked it. Ever since I wrote that drabble for you, I can't not picture them living this quiet life, just traveling and enjoying/discovering each other. "Smaller on the Inside" - FOREVER!

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emraldeyedauter September 17 2011, 08:41:41 UTC
This is sweet zazie and makes me feel very happy.

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zazie11 September 17 2011, 19:59:36 UTC
Thank you, Sweetness - I'm glad for that! xo

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