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FML series (Kirk/McCoy, Pike/Boyce, R)

Feb 27, 2011 18:00

Title: FML (fuck my life) series
Fandom & Pairing: Star Trek AOS, Pike/Boyce, Kirk/McCoy and foursome mix
Rating: up to NC-17
Warnings: none
Word Count: Around 10,000 for all six episodes / This part 1500
Prompt: This is an expanded version of a fill written for the jim_and_bones Fuck My Life Flash Fill Challenge, to an inspired prompt from weepingnaiad.
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pike/boyce, fml series, kirk/mcoy, r

Comments 33

rosiedlotrfan February 27 2011, 18:47:42 UTC

LOL! This was great! I loved the way it gradually dawns on Bones that this is not who he thought was on the other end of the comm.

Any chance of finding out what response Jim gets to his message? :)

zauzat February 27 2011, 18:59:02 UTC

I suspect the Admirals may just say yes, and Jim may just find that he's no more in charge of the situation than Leonard is. But I don't think I'm going to write it. I need a plot twist as well as a porn scene to be inspired.

Thanks for commenting!

imachar February 27 2011, 19:10:57 UTC

Oh that was such a treat...I love the way Boyce plays McCoy and the slow realisation that this isn't Jim and he is sooo fucked...(and not in the way he was intending).

I can see the Admirals would just love Jim's offer....two pretty boys on whom to unleash their decades of experience...hell yes....

“And they’ve got a point, y’know. You would look really pretty plugged up at both ends. D’you think they’d be up for a foursome? I could direct!” Oh yeah right Jim, he is so delusional if he thinks he'd be in control.

Hmm...thanks for that...now I'll go back to beta'ing your next offering....:)

zauzat February 27 2011, 19:20:48 UTC

Got it in one. Jim is TOTALLY misled in thinking he'd be in charge. :) I'm glad you liked it.

smokiquartz February 27 2011, 19:29:06 UTC

:D super great!! loved, loved loved it!
I giggled the whole way through!!
And if you could somehow write a sequel,
I will bake you cookies!!!
*enables*

zauzat February 27 2011, 20:14:14 UTC

Thank you for the lovely comment. I'm not 'feeling' a sequel at the moment, but you never know.

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zauzat February 27 2011, 20:16:20 UTC

Thanks for the lovely comment. A companion piece is an interesting idea. *Wanders off to ponder.*

kitsunesspblm February 27 2011, 21:08:47 UTC

Amazing... and my mind is just fucking imaginem Jim on the bad, tied and Bones being "plugged up at both ends" by Pike and Boyce!

I loved, god, Bones is just gorgeus when hi's embarressed.

Gih^^

zauzat February 27 2011, 21:14:55 UTC

Oh yes, I'm sure they'd tie Jim up and make him watch, just to punish them for his cheek. Thanks for commenting. :)