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H50: who would not be wise

Feb 19, 2012 06:23

title: who would not be wise
fandom: hawaii five 0
rating/pairing: pg13, gen temafic
summary: three things on the job that reminded Kono of her childhood and one thing that doesn't

( on a path walked upon by my ancestors )

pairing: gen, rating: pg, pairing: teamfic, fandom: hawaii five 0

Comments 12

lou_c February 19 2012, 11:47:34 UTC

I love your badass Kono and I liked the team vibe very much. And I am like your games Kono. People don't play with me now... I hope you foray again and again.

I plan to go to Hawaii in September this year, I am very excited! It looks like an amazing place to go and I'd love a local's tips on things that should be seen.

blahnicity February 20 2012, 07:07:01 UTC

oh no, so competitive xD. thanks for reading ( ... )

4thoffive February 19 2012, 17:22:04 UTC

That was wonderful. I hope you write many more 5-0 stories

blahnicity February 20 2012, 07:08:04 UTC

thank you :). The show is kind of addicting. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment <3

perspi February 20 2012, 03:25:35 UTC

Oh, wow, this was wonderful: Such an excellent look at Kono, at the team's adventures and all the ways Kono kicks ass and bonds with her team. I adored her pronouncing Danny and Steve husband and wife! (And that Steve would be reluctant to hold hands while Danny isn't, oh, yes).

A friendly suggestion: A beta would be a great help for the minor bumps that come up (like spelling and grammar, occasionally, and I thought there were a couple spots where your transitions between memories and scenes might have smoothed out a bit), but overall: I really, REALLY hope you keep writing for the fandom, and for Kono, because your take on all the characters is FANTASTIC and your Kono is especially excellent. \o/!!!

(I'm gonna rec on my LJ/DW, because great Kono fic like this deserves the love! :D)

blahnicity February 20 2012, 07:10:53 UTC

wow thank you :) I'm flattered that you enjoyed it.

Ah, yes. I have a beta but she doesn't know or care about h50 so until I can convince her I'm without and yeah. Sorry if those errors made it difficult or unenjoyable to read ;;. I am so in love with Kono it's not even funny and it's not FAIR because there's so not enough kono fic for how amazingly badass and cool and gorgeous she is :(

:o thank you! There needs to be tons and tons of kono fic, trufax xD. thank you for taking the time to read and leave such a lovely comment, I really appreciate it.

perspi February 25 2012, 03:49:41 UTC

No problemo, with the beta-thing; I wasn't sure just how new to fandom you were. :D There is an hawaii50-betas comm, if you want to find someone 5-0 specific.

And you are right! ALL THE KONO FIC, EVER! (I'm also going to be reccing over at h50-rec-room, for Free-for-All Friday...)

blahnicity February 20 2012, 08:18:42 UTC

also this is awkward but I was creeping on your journal and reading your fic and I really love it so >.>. I'm sort of a serial lurker but your writing is really really good :)

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rahnee13 February 25 2012, 16:43:15 UTC

Great story! I enjoy team-fic and I think you did a fantastic job of capturing the team dynamic as well as each of their individual characters. Your Kono is wonderful. Each scenario was believable and the story as a whole had a nice feel of continuity.

earthquakedream February 25 2012, 18:29:50 UTC

kono is my faaavorite and you've got her spot on here, along with the rest of the team. seriously, this is so lovely and warm and makes me smile so much. i can't wait to see more from you!