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Family Matters: Chapter 21

May 15, 2016 19:09

Title: Family matters ~ Chapter 21/22
Pairing: Jun, Masaki, Sho, Satoshi, Kazu (there are going to be additional side-characters though. No OCs.) I'm trying to give each of the five their well-deserves spot-light <3
Rating: PG
Multi-chapter
Genre: family!AU in which Arashi are brothers :-) slice of life, a little drama (and I'm trying to add some ( Read more... )

p: ot5 arashi friendship, genre: au, l: multi-chapter, r: pg, series: family matters, genre: family

Comments 18

learashi May 15 2016, 21:29:27 UTC

Noo, don't remind me that there is only one chapter to go!
You know, I actually forgot about Jun and the talk he had about this with his school. I guess Kazu's drama sort of overshadowed everything else.
They all seem to be so well balanced now and happy. I have this great mental picture of Sho doing yoga ☺.
Hopefully they can persuade Jun to think about his own future happiness not worry about everyone else first.
This has been such a wonderful series. I'm so looking forward to the last part (but sad at the same time). xoxoxo

lilly0 May 22 2016, 10:36:39 UTC

Thanks so much for your lovely comment, dear! ♥
You are right, Kazu's drama dominated the last chapters, so a few things remained in the back... until now. The last chapter will basically bring this plot to an end ^^
(I don't think I'll be able to let this story go :D I'm already planning a sequel :D)

learashi May 22 2016, 10:44:13 UTC

Really??
Squeeeeee, runs around room, arms flailing wildly.

lilly0 May 22 2016, 15:50:09 UTC

Yes :D I thought about settling it five years in the future. (Though I'll miss writing Jun and Kazu as teenagers :D)

ext_3581154 May 16 2016, 00:55:57 UTC

Wow Jun is amazing.1 year abroad .Wow i love the talk between Kazu and Toshi.I wonder what they will do for convince Jun to go study the danse.Jun begin dancing when Kazu were is the hospital or he begin after?
Oh this story arrive in the end but i want to ask you to write a sequel please.
I love this story so much.

lilly0 May 22 2016, 10:37:47 UTC

Thanks so much for your lovely comment! ♥
Yes, Jun has been working on his dream silently for a while, not telling the others :D He was dancing before the accident already, and started to pick it up again when Kazu was at the hospital :-)

reiichun May 16 2016, 01:31:48 UTC

My eyes got so teary when i read the part about Jun mentioned how their older brothers sacrified everything to makes sure Kazu and Jun can live comfortably. I just can't imagine how they have to give up completely on their dreams. But it amazed me because they set a new resolution after that, which is taking care of their little brother ( ... )

lilly0 May 22 2016, 10:41:59 UTC

Thanks so much for your awesome comment!! *huggles*

I guess, this knowledge - that the other three gave up on their dreams to look after their younger brothers - laid heavily on Jun's mind. He was/is feeling responsible and guilty for it. But as you said: They set a new resolution after that <3

Haha, yoga helped Sho to develop his zen-mode :D

I'm happy you liked the Satoshi-Kazu talk. It was basically the climax of the second half of the storyline, so I'm really relieved it worked ♥

say_oh_chan May 16 2016, 09:53:26 UTC

What ? Only one chapter to go ? T_T I don't want to T_T I don't want to let go this wonderful family T_T

I've been on holidays for two weeks and what a wonderful surprise to see that three chapters were waiting for me *^*
I am really happy to see that Satoshi and Nino finally made up ! It's so relieving to see that everyone is in good terms now ♥ I love Sho's new zen mode x) I can imagine him in his yoga class x)

Thanks for this it's always a pleasure to read you ^^

lilly0 May 22 2016, 10:43:53 UTC

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!! ♥♥

Yes, Satoshi and Kazu finally made up again! It took them a while, didn't it? :D So, finally they are all getting along again <3

yukitsubute May 16 2016, 18:15:44 UTC

*lol* Nino and Ohno's make up talk is just great. I really can imagine that it's not easy to talk with Ohno about feelings.
And Nino crying in the end? *lol* I am glad they solved their problems.

Oh my, Yoga Sho??? *loooooool* But it helped, he got easier to handle with that :D :D :D :D

Poor Jun, I can understand his thoughts though. But I think his brothers see that a little different and they want him to go. I hope he gets the chance to go abroad. Of course he'll miss his family, but with Skype and everything, that's not a big deal.

Sho and Aiba throw a party? *lol* That'll be a mess :D

Thanks for the update, I enjoyed reading it.

lilly0 May 22 2016, 11:05:02 UTC

Yes, finally these two made up agan. Now all of them get along... finally <3
Haha, yes, Sho does yoga. It helps him with his zen-mode :D

Thanks so much for your comment, dear! ♥