Comments | yukanda_lavi: From Doomsday to Doomsday, Chapter 1

yukanda_lavi

From Doomsday to Doomsday, Chapter 1

Mar 12, 2010 13:57

Title: From Doomsday to Doomsday
Pairing: Kanda/Lavi
Rating: NC-17 (For now, rating may go up for later chapters)
Summary: A Japanese Officer, Kanda Yuu, is sent to Germany before World War II break out to assist the German future ally for the investigations about some classified information's leaks. Assigned against his will to the Third Reich's SS ( Read more... )

kanda, fanfic, lavi

Comments 14

tossino March 12 2010, 17:46:34 UTC

WORLD WAR TWO FIC! 8DDDD

So, the idea intrigues me. I'm not entirely pulled in yet, but I'll wait and see where this goes. It's looking good so far~ Decent writing, good characterisations. I hope we'll see how Tiedoll ended up there?

*Friends you*

yukanda_lavi March 12 2010, 17:59:05 UTC

*cries* "decent" means I still sucks?
Or do you mean I should kill the beta? (Because it was betaed O_O)
Anyway thanks for being honest^^
And, HELL YES, when the thought of Kanda wearing an SS uniform hit me... I simply couldn't stop me from writing this one XD
And again, it was for a FIC contest based on a history period, to be chosen between some imposed by the contest's owner. When I saw WWII in the list my brain did an automatic association!

(Yes I have some plans for Tiedoll XD)

tossino March 12 2010, 18:05:06 UTC

Decent means it's not great or brilliant, but definitely not bad, so no you don't suck. XDDD No offence, of course. I'm just picky. Keep writing and I'm sure you'll get better~

Sudden inspiration ftw!

(Awesome~)

dementiamorphea March 12 2010, 18:02:19 UTC

Oooh! Brilliant concept! I always look forward to writings set in WWII setting, I find it highly intriguing (and this part of history is quite related to my country, too ( ... )

yukanda_lavi March 12 2010, 23:43:40 UTC

Well, I did a similar association just as you did ( ... )

dementiamorphea March 13 2010, 11:38:05 UTC

Haha, absolutely!

Alright then, that makes sense I guess. I just have trouble picturing Tiedoll in a war, but.. He does have a tougher side, and he's also similar to Kanda in some points (like mission being first priority rather than his own well being). If you pull it off, cudos to you. :3

Ah, so you want to stay true to everyone's nationalities. But just like everyone was gathered in England for the Black Order, it could be the same with a war - there were people of different nations in command in the concentration camps, for example. Still your choice makes sense, so I'm not arguing against it.

Hooray! Happy ending! (Also are/will you be uploading this to FFnet?)

Alright then, good luck~ And wow, that does suck. Well, you could always ask more people for help? :3 Maybe someone has enough free time.

I have no idea - maybe it corrects the spelling, but not sentence structure? For example this: "Like it or not, we're take those books." - it should be either "we're takING", or "we're GOING TO take". 0.0

yukanda_lavi March 13 2010, 12:41:33 UTC

O_O I know it can't correct sentence structure, I was trusting the beta for that........ I think Annette is just too busy lately and she wasn't too much into it? I can't blame her, though ( ... )

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strayhowl March 12 2010, 18:46:13 UTC

Poor Lavi. I love historical AUs, and I really like the setup of this one so far. This seems like it's going to be very interesting, so I can't wait to see where it goes. Looking forward to the next chapter.

yukanda_lavi March 13 2010, 12:47:30 UTC

AHAH, Lavi sometimes could be so naive XD Glad you liked it! As I was saying answering the other comments, second chapter is on beta, and I will ask her for when she thinks she could find some time to edit it^^

marionetteblue3 May 14 2010, 13:00:11 UTC

Kanda? SS officer?

Am I wrong to think that's kinda hot. >.>

yukanda_lavi May 14 2010, 14:54:11 UTC

XD At all.
That's basically why I wrote it... *cough*