LOVING YUU

[yukanda_lavi]

Title: LOVING YUU
Genre: Romance
Pairing: Lavi/Kanda
Rating: T
Summary: Lavi admires Kanda while he's asleep, thinking over what he loves the most of the Japanese man. LaviYuu attempt at poetry, posted for Kanda's Birthday!
Warnings: Lavi's corniness, implied boy/boy sex...
Note: Thanks so much to Morphine Dementia who helped me out with this one, and

Comments

[dementiamorphea]

I LOVE THIS. So very sweet, quite poetic as well, drabble in its glory. <3 Kanda is just that beautiful and awesome, and Lavi's thoughts depict that really well. <3 Pretty.

(Also, I just remembered what I didn't before: eyes "cast" lightnings, not "send" them - sorry, I've forgotten that phrase and only now remembered. x'D)

Nicely done! <3

(If you can spare a moment, why don't you link your fics here too: http://thelaviyufesthq.livejournal.com/1264.html Thanks! <3)

[yukanda_lavi]

Shit, I had to understand it by myself since I use "cast" for glares and so on...
Anyways! Thank you so much XD
I wanted to link the fic, but (if you spot the time in which I posted...) I was SO damn tired and decided to do it today u_u

This evening, since - ehm - I'm at work now ^^""

[yukanda_lavi]

Okay, I had to quit the answer quickly 'cause my boss caught me XD

[pywen]

*whistles* you got Lavi's persona in, pal! I was so well written and pinpointed the center so easily that I am wonder if you aren't Hoshino in disguise. (just joking~)

Kanda's description was just PERFECT. And the last line made me laugh xD Good job on this! ^^

[yukanda_lavi]

Thanks a lot!
Especially bacause this story saw the light in a very particular situation XD (read my answer to Dementia to know what it was XD)

Sadly, I'm not Hoshino nor I own any of the D.Gray-man characters... Otherwise - beside to Lavi and Kanda being together - there would have been several sudden deaths, I swear.

[pywen]

I seriousely hope that Leverrier belongs to the category of those you want to kill if ever DGM falls into your ownership, because I'll be right behind ya for this one.

[yukanda_lavi]

Thanks XD And you're so right on that! Kanda wouldn't be able to express in words the way he views Lavi XD
But yeah, it would be interesting trying to imagine Kanda striving in the attempt to define what he feels for Lavi.
I may consider to give it a try, my second trip to Japan Expo is near XDDD (to understand what I mean you need to read my answer to deme-chan^^"")