The KaibaCorp Affair (#104--Universe Alterations)

[rose_of_pollux]

Challenge Name/Number: #104--Universe Alterations

Comments

[insaneladybug]

This is great! I'm always skeptical about changing time periods, but it's pretty easy to forget that it's the '60's here, aside from the Cold War mentions. Everything feels very right.

I love how pleased Seto is to finally hear some cold, hard logic. LOL.

This a very intense-sounding plot, too. Poor Siegfried! I'm glad that Seto finally decides to accept the help. And Mai being an informant as a way of making recompense is wonderful!

[rose_of_pollux]

Thanks! Indeed, aside from that, you wouldn't be able to tell.

LOL, yes, a relief for once!

Thanks! Indeed, there's a lot to be concerned about, and yesss, I wanted Mai to be a part of things! Maybe I can expand on this idea in the future!

[hergan416]

I love this! The dialogue flows just right, gives the tone of the cold war going on without changing too much, and captures the characters quite well. It is really easy to imagine this scene as I read it, just a great job using descriptive skills.

[rose_of_pollux]

Glad you enjoyed it! I had fun with this, definitely!

[nenya85]

I'm a total sucker for The Man From UNCLE! I thought this was adorable. I really liked Kaiba's mild irritation and I thought Solo and Kuryakin were well done.

[rose_of_pollux]

Thanks! I just got into MFU at the beginning of this year and just fell in love!

Glad you liked it!