Quiere [1/?] [peterick;ashwentzday]

[yeyaness]

Title: Quiere [1/?]
Author: yeyaness
Pairing: Peterick [Pete Wentz/Patrick Stump]; AshWentzday [Pete Wentz/Ashlee Simpson].
POV: Third, limited omniscient.
Rating (changes according to chapter content): PG-13
Summary: Pete has always wondered what it's like to be able to love one person at one time with one whole heart. Instead, he gets firsthand lessons

Comments

[thebrokenprince]

you killed me. i hope you're pleased with yourself.

i love this, a lot. i love how you set up how he's pulled between them so much, and every time he's with one he wants the other. the twentysomething thirysomething thing made me laugh, too.

[yeyaness]

D; oh noez -revives- (though yes, I am actually quite pleased).

thank you soso much, hun.

:')

[i_loove_to_rock]

i spotted a few typos and such, but storywise, looooooove. mad love!

[yeyaness]

ty ty veryy much.

<3

[beat08]

That was very nicely written. Ha, loved the thing about Twilight. Quite comical. =]

[yeyaness]

:D I kinda thought someone might smack me halfway across the world for that little jibe at twilight.

glad to see you apreciate!!

thanks for your comment&time:)

[xolunchbox]

I really like this so far! Can't wait for more :)

[yeyaness]

^_^
thanks for reading and commenting<33

I love your ava btw. 'trick looks so adorable in his wee little hat.

[xolunchbox]

No problem <3

Eee, he does XD

[electroniclime]

I really liked the part where it says ashlee found out when patrick and pete were kissing with bleeding teeth. or maybe the whole sharing blood in the mouth thing. which makes me feel morbid. but i really liked it. :]

[yeyaness]

don't worry about it!! if you're morbid for thinking it then imagine how morbid I must be for writing it.

there's nothing wrong with a little morbidity from time to time anyway :)

thanks for reading and commenting, bb<33