Very nice chapter, but there seems to be a bit of a time skip. Is 53 not a typo?
Also, not to be fussy, but you lay an object down, and you lie down upon the bed. Mostly I ignore lay/lie issues, I just can't see Hermione *ever* misusing it, though. So it was distracting.
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But where is chapter 52???
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Still. Very happy to see more of this.
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Also, not to be fussy, but you lay an object down, and you lie down upon the bed. Mostly I ignore lay/lie issues, I just can't see Hermione *ever* misusing it, though. So it was distracting.
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It seems like everyone acknowledges that the trip was necessary - and deal with the fallout later...
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