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xlilabutx

Fade Into You

Mar 20, 2011 00:22

Type: Fanfiction
World: Twilight

Status: one shot

Title: Fade Into You
Rating: M
Genre: Romance
Pairing: Jacob & Bella

Summary: Jacob walks in on Bella in a very private situation.

Notes: This is dedicated to audreyii_fic , because she gave me the prompt for this (don't click the link if you're at work or surrounded by children^^)

( This could not be happening. Not to me, the eternal second best, second in line. It. Could. Just. Not. Be. Real. )

bella swan, twilight, m, jacob black, oneshot, romance

Comments 13

audreyii_fic March 20 2011, 00:12:58 UTC

*squeep*

I'll be back with something coherent later.

needjakenow March 20 2011, 00:31:42 UTC

Pfft, you were nervous about this?! Tsk tsk, bb. This was great.

I'm going to stay the night, so you have to come over anyway and bring me my meds.

I love fics that remind readers that Jacob has got lots of responsibility for a kid.

Bella had not died, my mother had been dead for a long time. It were Seth and Leah who got to be weak today.

...and that he's suffered some heartfail and is still as generous and caring as ever.

I'm going to restrain from copy and pasting all my favorite parts because there are too many of them and this comment will end up being longer than the fic. Just one more though... xD

"Bells," I whispered in response, her soft hum telling me enough, that she would soon fall asleep against me, peacefully this time, "Just… don't stop, okay?"

*DIES* Love the underlying message. As if anyone could ever stop loving you, Jacob Black. I loved this so damn much and you are now forgiven for every time you've ever made me cry.

amaggiepie March 20 2011, 04:47:32 UTC

This is just... WOW.

*fans self*

SEXXXXYYYYYYYY!

I think I also need to come back later with something coherent. Right now, I might need to go jump the Man's bones. ;)

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amaggiepie March 21 2011, 01:04:17 UTC

I just wanted to let you know that I did indeed jump the Man after reading this. And it was good. And in the morning he said, "why did you rape me last night" and I said "... no reason..."

I hope that's not too much information. It was just that hot.

I love how you take it almost there but it is still so sexy and sensual and sweet and JakeandBells. I was never like "Oh, please just get on with it!" which is what I feel like sometimes when reading something that might lead to sex. I think that this was so much sexier and so much more IC than them actually having sex could have been. The details were amazing. I beleived all of it. And the prompt is so hot. *fans self* I must see Black Swan now. MUST.

Great job, lady. <3

alaria March 20 2011, 06:55:37 UTC

This is one of the hottest things I have read! And still it was so much Jake and Bella. The last line was so sweet and just breaks my heart.

marblemeadow March 20 2011, 11:33:38 UTC

THIS WAS PURE AWESOME. =) You did a great job. Thanks for sharing!