[FIC] NewS - Break (With Me) [4/5]

[grydo2life]

Title: Break (With Me) [4/5]
Fandom: NewS
Pairing: Masuda/Tegoshi
Rating: PG-13 (mentions of child abuse and neglect)
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: He pulls him close, arms circling his smaller form tight, and he murmurs softly, “Go to sleep, Tesshi.” He adds, a moment later, as though he knows what the younger is thinking, “I’ll be here tomorrow. I

Comments

[momonyan]

This was a torture to read ;______; I could really feel how sad they were because they were going to be parted, because they want to be together...Seriously, your writing is so awesome, you described the feelings so well, and it felt so real!

I was sad until Massu decided to go see Tego off <3 It's a good thing that he didn't just give up like that, but will fight to see Tego again!
And the kiss <333 THE KISS *_______* It was so sweet, they really do belong together <3333

This was totally awesome ^.^ I can't wait to read the last part, but I will really miss this story when it's finished...Thanks you for making my day better, this made me smile ^.^<3333

[grydo2life]

Awww. Thank you so much♥ I'm so glad that you liked it. I'm a sucker for happy endings, so I couldn't just let Tego leave without something getting resolved ^^

I'm gonna miss this fic when it's finished too :( But I have others to share after this one is done, so don't be too sad~♥

[erikaoi]

Oh my.this is so heart breaking.huhu.massu u better go after tego soon and tego don’t forget ur love for him.update last part soon

[grydo2life]

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!

[chocomintkt]

Your writing for this piece is quietly beautiful. I know "quietly" is kind of a weird way to describe it, but there's just something about the bittersweetness that makes it feel that way. It's a lovely lovely, beautiful piece, and the way you built up their good bye was truly stunning. I can't wait for the last part!

[grydo2life]

Thank you for such a kind comment :3 I'm very glad that you liked it so far, and I hope the last part is just as good when I finally put it up :D

[fancyann1974]

this was so sad, and emotionally draining
but so good at the same time
cant wait for the next chapter
thank you so much for sharing

[grydo2life]

Thank you for reading!

[kataomi]

That was so perfect...I so liked it !!! I nearly cried ...that was such a sad and touching chapter ....They were all suffering in their own way ...not wanting to be parted. And then Massu finally took the lead and be selfish for one time. That was perfect. Him giving his chain was so cute too ......and the kiss ...so sweet !!!! I really liked how you described it !!! I cant wait to read the next chapter !!!! ^^

[grydo2life]

Aww, I'm glad you liked it! I know it's sad, but the hard times make the happy ones to come all that more special :3