[FIC] NewS - Break (With Me) [3/5]

Jul 19, 2010 14:13

Title: Break (With Me) [3/5]
Fandom: NewS
Pairing: Masuda/Tegoshi
Rating: PG-13 (mentions of child abuse and neglect)
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: He pulls him close, arms circling his smaller form tight, and he murmurs softly, “Go to sleep, Tesshi.” He adds, a moment later, as though he knows what the younger is thinking, “I’ll be here tomorrow. I ( Read more... )

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meli_29 July 19 2010, 23:45:33 UTC
that was the wrong answer! that was the worst answer ;w;!
asdasdasd
poor guys ;______;
poor tego, omg his mum died... he should reported his dad to the police, he killed her and he... all the briuses and scars that tegoshi has ;___; and still, he thinks that it's his fault, it is not!

Massu T_T you can't let Tegoshi go~ he needs you, he's... they need eachother and I really feel it here ;_;
Thanks for the update, I was waiting for this to appear and... asd, your writing is amazing. I'm so sad ;___;

Please, continue soon! tegomass needs a happy ending ♥

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grydo2life July 20 2010, 19:53:09 UTC
Massu has his reasons, even if they kind of suck >_< But yes, they need each other, very much so. Thank you for reading!

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hika_nishi July 20 2010, 03:16:55 UTC
aw, I had a feeling that tego's mom wasn't going to around for much longer. the poor thing ;_; she seemed so kind to her dear son...

as much as I want to see tegoshi go off and live his dream, it would break me to see him leave massu behind. it really sounded like, at the end there, he was almost asking massu to give him a reason to to leave. and that was not the right answer massu. you better chase after him.

thanks for sharing♥

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grydo2life July 20 2010, 19:54:38 UTC
LOL, I guess it WAS a bit of an obvious plot point :P

it really sounded like, at the end there, he was almost asking massu to give him a reason to to leave

You nailed it. That's exactly what I was going for :3 Don't worry, though. Massu won't let his Tesshi go that easily!

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fancyann1974 July 20 2010, 12:13:59 UTC
such a touching chapter
hope tegoshi will see that massu is really not happy he is going
cant wait for the next chapter
thank you so muchy for sharing

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grydo2life July 20 2010, 19:55:06 UTC
Thank you for reading!

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stephdannie July 20 2010, 13:51:59 UTC
oh... so poor tesshi. his life is so miserable. but it was so sad to that he has to leave massu. please bring massu with u tesshi!!! so sad chapter. T_T please update soon. can't wait for another chapter. chu!

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grydo2life July 20 2010, 19:55:38 UTC
Yeah~ Tesshi deserves so much better :[ Thank you for reading!

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kataomi July 23 2010, 03:39:07 UTC
Such a good chapter !!! So full of touching eventment !!!! Tesshi's mother death was so sad !!! And then the moment with Massu conforting Tesshi ...so touching ....so perfect ...and the moment that Massu realized that Tesshi would quit the city ...so sad ...Poor Massu ....he dont want Tesshi to leave him alone !!!!

Koyashige were perfect ....Even if because of Kei-chan Massu had a hard time about thinking that Tesshi was really too sick ^^''

Cant wait for the next chapter !!! *_*

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