[FIC] NewS - Break (With Me) [3/5]

Jul 19, 2010 14:13

Title: Break (With Me) [3/5]
Fandom: NewS
Pairing: Masuda/Tegoshi
Rating: PG-13 (mentions of child abuse and neglect)
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: He pulls him close, arms circling his smaller form tight, and he murmurs softly, “Go to sleep, Tesshi.” He adds, a moment later, as though he knows what the younger is thinking, “I’ll be here tomorrow. I ( Read more... )

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mikisans July 19 2010, 19:34:50 UTC
IVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS CHAPTER X]
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
D: D: D:his mom!!
but koyashige are <3
poor tegoshi!
poor massu!
ACK, dont go tegoshi! actually do go but bring massu with you :D
that was a sad chapter :(
but im looking forward to the next one
<3333333

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mikisans July 19 2010, 19:35:39 UTC
mehehe first. >;D

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grydo2life July 19 2010, 19:38:39 UTC
XD I'm glad you liked KoyaShige. I was worried that their tiny guest appearance wouldn't go over well XD And yes, this was a sad chapter. Tego and Massu just can't seem to get a break :/ I'm such a mean author XD

I'm glad you liked it! (And congrats on being first? XD)

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momonyan July 19 2010, 20:51:30 UTC
I'm actually teary-eyed right now, this was so sad and emotionally written ;_____;

Tego's mom died, that's so sad, because he really loved her ;_____; She even signed that paper for him without any questions, and fought with her husband about it...Poor, poor Tego, losing his beloved mom like that ;____;

It's great that Tego's audition went well, but it means that he has to leave Massu ;_____; I guess he really wants to get out of that town hat is full of bad memories, but what about Massu? I really wish that he can follow Tego to Tokyo, because it would be too sad if they got parted ;_________;

I'm sooooo looking forward to the next part, I can't wait to see what happens! This was awesome, just like the previous ones! ^.^<333333

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grydo2life July 20 2010, 19:49:43 UTC
I'm really glad you're enjoying it :3 And I so glad that you thought it was emotional; I felt like, when I was proofing it, it was somehow too distant and emotionless for the circumstances :/ I'm glad you didn't think so ^^

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darxina July 19 2010, 21:00:27 UTC
I love this fic!! I really do!! *_*
You capture both personalities perfectly. I like how Massu protects his tiny and weak Tegoshi, is absolutely cute, this pair makes me melt with their drama xD
I can't wait for the next chap! Tegoshi can't leave Massu!! T__T

I'm your follower from now on, keep writting please! ^_^

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grydo2life July 20 2010, 19:50:10 UTC
Huzzah, more readers XD I'm glad you're loving it :3

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yampanda July 19 2010, 22:17:15 UTC

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grydo2life July 20 2010, 19:50:30 UTC
LMAO

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erikaoi July 19 2010, 23:40:08 UTC
Aw!poor tego!but his mom is love.wrong answer massu!u should ask if tego wants to take u!more please

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grydo2life July 20 2010, 19:50:57 UTC
Yes, poor Tego :( bb needs more Massu-love. Thanks for reading!

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