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Drunken Compassion

Jan 09, 2006 19:17

NOW! Back by somewhat popular demand! I present Drunken Compassion- Chapters 1 through 4!!

I'm suprised that people actually remember that I posted the first chapter. But to those who read the first part . . . this story isn't going in the direction you probably think it's going in. . . Sorry.

Title: Drunken Compassion
Pairing: ColinandRyan
Rating: ( Read more... )

p: colin/ryan, a: broadway_bound3

Comments 5

krzcowzgomoo January 10 2006, 02:12:50 UTC

*squeels*
thanks! I waited patiently! See! And I wasnt disapointed!
*hops in circles*

emilyfairy January 10 2006, 18:10:29 UTC

I don't know why, but Colin making Ryan find the key cracked me up... I swear, I sat and laughed out loud at that for like five minutes. :)

Also, I love your wonky chapter titles. *g*

Emily :)

broadway_bound3 January 10 2006, 19:44:54 UTC

Thank you! I like them too. Something a little different.

clayangel January 13 2006, 22:05:52 UTC

Well, first of all, you still need to write more of this. ^_^

I love the set up in the first chapter. It's worded fantastically and it sets the mood perfectly. My favorite part is Colin making Ryan find the key. That's an adorable image. ^_^ I also liked Ryan thinking about the date rape drugs. That seems like one of those odd things that would go through your mind when you're not looking.

So, yes... more...?

broadway_bound3 January 14 2006, 12:45:10 UTC

Yeah, I had to look up those names on the internet. My sister was looking at it and was like, 'What are you doing?'. I'm like, 'It's for a story, go away.' I think the last part of the story will . . . calmer? Not as much funny stuff. I've been busier than I thought I would be lately.