This is really nitpicky, but your Alabama geography isn't quite right. Mobile is on the bay, which isn't really beachy and is mostly commercial, docks and pavement. The beaches are in Gulf Shores or Dauphin Island, but most of that is really high rent--there might be some trailer parks within walking distance of public beaches, but unless it's cold weather it'd be busy. Maybe they're sneaking onto someone's private beach...
You could make it river front. There are some trailer parks and low rent housing right on Dog River inside Mobile--that area floods every hurricane. It's more silty than sandy, and even if they lucked onto a sandy section it's not really what most people around here call a beach, but narratively it'd probably work.
You'd might be best off changing to some unnamed place in Florida. They got a lot more beach to choose from and more likely to have something that fits your plot.
I fear what Sam might've become if he'd stayed dead, his spirit following Dean everywhere. He's so angry already after only a couple of days of this, thinking of revenge. And his desperation to communicate with his brother only seems to be making things worse for Dean. Sigh.
Still loving this, even if it's breaking my heart over and over again.
Sam would make a very angry, vengeful ghost. Pretty scary. And yeah, it made it bad enough for Dean that selling his soul seemed like a viable option. Poor boys.
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You could make it river front. There are some trailer parks and low rent housing right on Dog River inside Mobile--that area floods every hurricane. It's more silty than sandy, and even if they lucked onto a sandy section it's not really what most people around here call a beach, but narratively it'd probably work.
You'd might be best off changing to some unnamed place in Florida. They got a lot more beach to choose from and more likely to have something that fits your plot.
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Still loving this, even if it's breaking my heart over and over again.
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