Comments | wisdomeagle: ficpost: "Phobic" McKay/Weir

wisdomeagle

ficpost: "Phobic" McKay/Weir

May 23, 2005 22:50

Title: Phobic
Fandom: Stargate: Atlantis
Pairing: McKay/Weir
Rating: R
Notes: For the Kink/Cliche Challenge. Prompts were "enclosed spaces" "something with gags" and "first time with a shy or bold virgin". Inspired by all of them, but mostly the enclosed spaces one.
Words: 2155
Summary: There's no such thing as a good time to have this discussion.
( on to the not-quite-smut )

mcweir, my fanfic, my gateverse fic, elizabeth weir, rodney mckay

Comments 29

loveanddarkness May 26 2005, 21:51:04 UTC

I love the wonderful intersection between lust and panic. It's a place I think Rodney lives, a lot.

Love this. So good.

wisdomeagle May 27 2005, 18:32:48 UTC

Thank you!

porthos1013 May 27 2005, 15:59:25 UTC

Oh my goodness! I love this! I agree, panicked!Rodney is one of my favorites (curse SciFi channel for skipping 38 Minutes!) and you capture him INCREDIBLY well! The line that really got me and set the tone for the whole fic, for me at least, was:

Elizabeth kisses him. And his brain short-circuits, and several electrical impulses misfire at once causing him to remember his cat and wonder if she's being taken care of, attempt to draft a violent response to a former supervisor's critique of his lab work, and of course, try to figure out whether he has any condoms actually handy at the moment or if they are all, like his common sense, Outside The Closet.

So priceless! I love it! <3

wisdomeagle May 27 2005, 18:33:24 UTC

Aww, thanks so much. Yay panicked!Rodney.

<3 Thanks for reading.

YAY!!! porthos1013 May 28 2005, 00:24:54 UTC

Excellent McWeir fic; really glad Hans put the fic rec at McWeir smut :) I absolutely adore panicking Rodney :) LOVE this fic, hope to read more from you!!
BethV a/k/a taurichick :)

Re: YAY!!! wisdomeagle June 9 2005, 23:15:12 UTC

Yay! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

lucius_admirer May 28 2005, 04:01:00 UTC

Awwww wonderful!!! &hearts Panicked!Rodney is so adorable *giggles* Yay for McWeir smut, there should be more :D Someone should write more McWeir scenes into SGA...esp. steamy McWeir scenes *heeee* *wants to see naked!Rodney*

wisdomeagle June 9 2005, 23:18:01 UTC

Aww, thank you! I'm glad you liked.m

elaran May 28 2005, 09:56:00 UTC

<3. muchly. XD

wisdomeagle June 9 2005, 23:19:47 UTC

<3 back. :D

groovekittie June 7 2005, 02:53:34 UTC

Surfed over from the McKay/Weir comm. Soooooo glad I did! I absolutely &heart; this fic! I am in utter awe of you! Thank you! *spweeeeee!*

wisdomeagle June 9 2005, 23:23:25 UTC

YAY! I'm so glad you enjoyed. :D