Before This Song Ends, for Iridae

Aug 15, 2016 22:52

Title: Before This Song Ends
Recipient: iridaePairing or character: Seunghoon/Taehyun ( Read more... )

! 2016, pairing: seunghoon/taehyun, rating: pg-13

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iridae August 15 2016, 17:52:15 UTC
omgggggggggggggg

okay i love this i honestly honestly love this it is soo cleverly set out i adore how every tiny thing he notices on stage triggers another memory so seamlessly and you don't know every detail but you don't need to in order to understand seunghoon's emotions and why he's feeling this way and i love that you chose to write rock band!winner and i LOVE how you worked in the quote and just UGH

THIS IS WONDERFUL

thank you so much for this truly <3<3<3

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okamikami September 2 2016, 14:51:12 UTC
Ahhhhhh! I can finally reply to this! I'm so so so glad you liked it! I actually went back and re-wrote the entire fic, since I didn't like what I had originally started on. It isn't very long or anything like that, but I love the poem you had in mind, and I wanted to at least attempt at making it a little bit more "artistic" than just a straight forward fic?

Anyways! I am so so so glad you liked it, and thank you for requesting something like this! It was really fun to finally write out some BandAU Winner <3

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ext_2279633 August 16 2016, 13:02:45 UTC
aww ;; <3 I loved the atmosphere of this? like a sort of.. detached sadness, if that makes sense? and the characterization (seunghoooon<3 also!!! that line about both him and taehyun being broken in the same way akdhjdhd!) and the tension to find out what went wrong.

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alectrona19 August 17 2016, 02:46:48 UTC
I love the characterisation in this fic :''') <3 the development of the story was also very well done: it hurts, it makes me want to punch Seunghoon and Taehyun and Mino in the face, it makes my heart flutters, it's just a good combination of all!

Thank you for writing!

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