All that's Left to Burn

[falsemurmur]

title: All that's Left to Burn
fandom: Heroes
summary: The mark that indicates where the flames began lies on the surface of the wooden floor like a black ‘X’ drawn for a dangerous trail to be walked. Bait that tiptoes in circles, making you spin until you drop and can’t go on. She was that ‘X.’
characters/pairings: Peter, Claire (mentions of Peter/

Comments

[katmillia]

Wow this was awesome. Very, very powerful. And the imagery was beautiful. The way you crafted the characters together just blew me away. <3

[falsemurmur]

Thank you so much, your compliment definitely brightened my day. Just glad you enjoyed it. :)

[aunt_zelda]

...
That was ... that was ... wow ...
OUCH.
I love how it was interchanged with flashbacks, it reminded me of Dr. Manhatten's chapter in 'Watchmen' if that makes any sense ... which is to say it was incredibly well thought out.
*squeaks* Molly death ... *cries*

Elle telling him that she’d lost the baby.
That's where my blood went cold. *shudders*

[falsemurmur]

Although I have yet to read them I've heard so many raves and fantastic things about the Watchmen graphic novels, that I am just astounded by the comparison--however small it may be. Thank you so much, you're beyond kind! Just glad you enjoyed this. :)

[aunt_zelda]

Oh, you MUST read it. It's very famous and really good and a must-read for superhero-fans.
You are most welcome!

[whimsey]

Okay, so I realize how late this is, but wow. That was amazing. The hurt Peter must be feeling.

[falsemurmur]

It's never too late too leave such wonderful feedback. ;)

Thanks so much!

[cruiscin_lan]

Talk about late to the party. I've only just finished this, but it took my breath away.