18: fan fic { numb3rs } : "rebirthing [1/4]" [colby]

[neur0vanity]

title. rebirthing [1/4]
author. nv
fandom. numb3rs
characters. colby granger, charlie eppes (colby/david, colby/charlie)
genre. angst/drama
rating. nc-17
warnings. pre-slash, masturbation, language
word count. 2678
spoilers. "the janus list," "trust metric"
summary. colby returns and struggles to regain his life.
feedback. is the reason i do this

Comments

[irena_adler]

Yay, excellent start! Loved how you got inside Colby's head.

[neur0vanity]

Thanks! At the time I started writing this, I felt like I could empathize with Colby, but his head was still a dark place to be.

[lorientad]

good story! i like where you're going with that! and i'm sad for colby he did his duty and in thanks his shunned by his friends! but, maybe charlie will give him hope and joy again. *grin*

[neur0vanity]

Colby really needs someone like Charlie right now. :)

Thank you.

[lorientad]

too true. Charlie is so cute and so trusting. he always want to make people around him happy;

[castalie]

What a great start! I'm definitely hooked and pretty impatient to see where you're leading us :-) It was quite touching how Charlie - even though he doesn't know it - actually managed to make Colby forget about his pain for a moment. It does bode well for the future; even if the actual 'start' was less than stellar.

[neur0vanity]

Thanks! The start was definitely rocky - Colby being in such a bad place and not able to recognize that maybe someone does want him around, and Charlie being so insecure and sensitive.

Love your icon!

[merle_p]

“I, uh, I don’t know. I kind of wasn’t expecting you to say yes."
But he called anyway :-)

Yeah! After last week's episode, I was craving for more Colby/Charlie fic.

Love it, can't wait for the next part!

[neur0vanity]

Charlie's strange like that. :)

Thanks so much! The next part will (hopefully) be up this evening.

[fredbassett]

Excellent story, glad to see there'll be more. The Colby/Charlie was a masterpiece of foot in mouthism.

[neur0vanity]

Thank you! I love the boys being awkward with each other.