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SG-1 Fic: A Loose Bolt in a Complete Machine (PG-13) (2/5)

Jun 22, 2009 17:55

Fandom: Stargate: SG-1
Title: A Loose Bolt in a Complete Machine (2/5)
Author: theemdash
Rating: PG-13 for language and violence
Word Count: ~50,000 (in 5 parts)
Pairing: Jack/Daniel
Summary: SG-1 returns to Tekhne to extract Gerard, the inventor of the Vinculum (in Jack-speak, "internet in the brain"). But the mission goes south when Daniel is captured. ( Read more... )

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Comments 3

akasha_lilian June 23 2009, 11:06:45 UTC

Woman you are putting Daniel through a lot of torture, aren't you? Ouch! Of course he'd never shut up, even if it meant less beatings. Oh Daniel, you'll probably never learn...

It'd be a lot easier if you'd come out and talk to us.

Just a tiny coding mistake, thought I'd point it out! ;-)

theemdash June 23 2009, 11:15:04 UTC

Um, I love Daniel? ;)

Oh! Thanks for catching that coding mistake. This was so long I couldn't do my normal check and was sure I'd miss something.

roadrunner1896 November 10 2009, 11:00:10 UTC

A meaty fist punched him in the stomach, making him double over. He gasped for air, his mouth working like a beached fish. He couldn't put any meaning to this-cleaning him, but beating him? He racked his brain, trying to come up with cultural significance, rituals, anything that he might be able to relate to this experience, some way to identify with what was happening to him.

Someone should introduce him to fandom and all those whumpage fans out here. :D