Down to get down tonight

Sep 28, 2012 10:29

Title Your Parachute Looks Kinda Like a Kite From Here
By weekend_exile
Fandom Supernatural RPS
Pairing Jared/Jensen
Rating PG
Summary In which Jared's a bigshot artist (or not) who spends most of his time doodling and being ridiculously in love with his roommate, and said roommate tries to put up with his doodling sasquatch ass. AU.
Notes I refuse to accept ( Read more... )

must be outta my mind, spn_rps, j2

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fanspired September 28 2012, 05:59:53 UTC
I tried to walk away from this 3 times because I don't read RPS. I don't. But I wound up coming back and reading to the end anyway. Couldn't help myself. Cute as all get out :)

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weekend_exile September 28 2012, 06:05:10 UTC
heh heh. Jared and Jensen are just pure evil like that. Gad to know you liked (and didn't drown in the schmoop)

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fanspired September 28 2012, 06:58:44 UTC
Plus, I have a review to write, an anthology to edit and an ezine to get out and I'm reading fanfic instead so I know EXACTLY where Jared is coming from with those 17 pencils . . . :)

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weekend_exile September 28 2012, 07:08:44 UTC
those seventeen pencils are symbolic for the deriative equations i'm supposed to have done already.

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part 1 ireena September 28 2012, 10:34:11 UTC
I’m like a kid in a new shiny candy store. I wanna eat all the candy there is in one go, but I can have only one at a time. Cause, you know, overdose can happen and then what? Salt and burn is not something I’m anticipating much these days. If anything I want to be a spirit nagging you for the rest of your life to write more. So I’m starting small. Baby steps. Also, just to keep my promise and maybe make you study some more ( ... )

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Re: part 1 weekend_exile September 28 2012, 14:35:38 UTC
I was reading my e-mails on my way home on my phone, and when I got to the notification of your comment, I started screaming at my big brother (who was unlucky enough to be on the driver's seat at the time) "SHE WROTE ME FOUR PAGES!!!!!"

So. YOU WROTE ME FOUR PAGES!!!!

Also, glad I awakened the fifteen year old in you, it seems like most of the time all I'm doing is squeeing over stuff like I haven't hit puberty yet.

It's uncanny, how you seem so in-sync with everything I write. Like, you describe the VERY SAME mental image I had when I was writing. It's like I'm only writing half the story and leaving you to do the rest, because you make that shit look easy.

One of these days, I'll sit down and write a ten thousand word ode to your amazing comments. For now, I can only say THANK YOU IRINA'S PARENTS FOR CREATING SUCH AN AWESOME PERSON!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(ha. made you think about your parents doing it :DDD)

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Re: part 1 ireena September 28 2012, 22:37:22 UTC
Part of the reason I can wtite you these pages is that I feel the story (if it makes any sense). I mean, for me this is a huge deal. firstly because English is my second (third?) language and it kinda hard to find all the right words. And secondly even if the story is good sometimes you just have nothing to say. So yeah, we kinda in sync here.
Which is awesome. I mean how many writers are there who can make you feel this way? Take credit, it's all your doing.)

(you totally did, which is wierd, let's not go there :)))

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Part 2 (because I'm lame and can't stop rambling) ireena September 28 2012, 10:34:55 UTC
"How does a sasquatch from fucking San Antonio get to become 'Apollo with a paintbrush ( ... )

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Your kind of lame is the kind of lame I dream of being weekend_exile September 28 2012, 14:44:54 UTC
Heh. The poetry kinda creeps in when I'm not looking. DO NOT SELL YOUR KIDNEY I WILL BE UNABLE TO LOVE A KIDNEY-LESS PERSON ('cause I'm kinda shallow like that)

seriously, though. you're the first person who liked the meandering metaphors and the kinda vague descriptions I dish out. I'd been starting to see it as a curse, everything from the weird structure of my sentences to the not-always-obvious plots I come up with. I really do mean it when I say you mean quite a bit to me.

The counting backwards thing: I saw my best friend do it with her boyfriend, and rolled my eyes so hard I thought of that lube-in-eyeballs metaphor, and promptly was grossed out in the middle of the street.

You quoted Drifts!!!!! Drifts is like my firstborn, I love that thing to pieces. All in all, your comments were all the sprinkilings and sugar and ice cream and other unhealthy delicious stuff I could probably have asked for. Cheers, mate.

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Re: Your kind of lame is the kind of lame I dream of being ireena September 28 2012, 22:49:07 UTC
OK, I'll keep the kidney.) I'm used to it and will probably need it because of all the alcohol I'm consuming sometimes.)

Please don't change your style. It reminds me of Ani DiFranco a lot, same strange but very compelling pattern made from seemingly unrelated words and images. With it's own kind of beauty. Ones you get to know it you can't take it out of your head.)

Sure I did. That's the reason I'm here.) I fall in love with the text from the first line and after that I just couldn't stop if I wanted to. I wish I have the talent enough to translate it. But I've made like all my friends go read it, because it's awesome. I was running around telling everyone and there mother that I've finally found my perfect author.) I even commented back then, just not with 4 pages of love-your-work-never-stop-writing.)))

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xtasteofsin September 28 2012, 15:23:50 UTC
This right here is cuter than a baby bunny eating a cupcake. It's quite ironic that it's really that cute when Jensen and Jared are pure evil and are slowly killing us with their beauty... >.>

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weekend_exile October 1 2012, 14:21:04 UTC
I once had a vicious rabid rabbit, so bunny metaphors do nothing for me. Though, I admire your wise words of wisdom, 'cause Jared and Jensen are EVIL and should be BANNED.

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sammichgirl September 28 2012, 17:25:12 UTC
I never read J2 or RPS anything...and this, well, I was caught by the toast picture. And then reading about the doodles and toast nina doodles, and fell into it, completely. Damn you!

I freakin' loved it.

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weekend_exile October 1 2012, 13:50:52 UTC
The entire fic was caused by a mixture of shared fangirliness with evian_fork and the t-shirt I got with that picture with the slogan NINJA BREAD. I was a goner from that moment on.

Thanks for the love!

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