fic: All My Doves Have Flown (Jane/Jesse)

[waltzmatildah]

Title: All My Doves Have Flown
Fandom: Breaking Bad
Characters/Pairing: Jane, Jesse/Jane
Rating: M (drug use)
Word Count: 500
Prompt/Summary: Donuts from round two of the breaking_bad fic challenge. This is how it might have gone. If the world had turned a little slower.
Disclaimer: At my user info. page. Title and cut text from Cold Toes On The Cold Floor,

Comments

[swirlsofblue]

This is so incredibly beautiful :). I've never seen this tv show but now really want to watch.

[waltzmatildah]

Thank you so much. Especially for reading a fic for a show you've not seen (though, tbh, I do that regularly too! Haha!). I definitely recommend it, though only if you're prepared to be smaked in the face with violence, drugs, death, weaponry, ambigious morals, criminal acts, incredible characterisation, stunning cinematography, the most brilliant storytelling I've ever had the pleasure of watching...

Though, honestly, the violence is very strong. And in your face. Though not gratuitiously so. Just realistic I think (having never actually been involved in the cross border production and selling of crystal meth myself!!).

Anyway, enough babbling. It's my favourite show ever in the history of television. There have been three seasons, and the fourth starts in 27 days. Not that I'm counting down or anything!!

If you're interested, I've written one more Breaking Bad fic, That Long Forgotten Feeling Of Her.

[rorylie]

Oh god you kill me.

[waltzmatildah]

Jane :(

I wouldn't change what happened to her because it was part of one of my all time favourite storylines ever (the pink teddy bear). BUT, that does not mean I'm not uber sad that she's gone :(

BUT THAT IS WHAT FIC IS FOR!! YAY!

[fakepoptart]

The last three lines completely slayed me. Seriously, I'm in danger of like, bursting into tears.

[waltzmatildah]

Thank you! I'm so pleased you took the time to read this and then drop me a line. I'm still feeling my feet in this fandom as far as actually writing fic goes, so it's good to get some feedback.

Thank you, thank you!

[hungryhippo11]

Aww...*sniffles, gets teary*...this is so gorgeous, and so, SO SAD. Poor Jane :((

You write so perfectly for BB it's not funny.

[waltzmatildah]

Thank you so much! As much as I loved the "Demise Of Jane" storyline and the continuity involved in the pink teddy bear of doom, I do so miss her!!

I'm so glad you liked this! I find this show SO FREAKING HARD to write for, so I'm pleased that you think I do it well because, despite the challenge, I really, really want to write more...

[pamalax]

Lovely work, my dear.
Poor Jane ... poor Jesse.
So sad to think of the attempt at love and a future, something both needed so badly, gone so terribly wrong with neither strong enough to hold the other up. Losing Jane saved Jesse for while. I believe what happen will continue to save him, at least until there is no hope or salvation left to have.

Nice work.
Thanks for playing!!!!

[waltzmatildah]

Thank you, thank you!! I do miss Jane, but I also appreciate the role that her death played and it wouldn't be the same show if she was still alive so... I don't miss here THAT much! Haha! Just enough to write fic about her!

[pamalax]

Heading to bed I nearly forgot to tell you I got your all hooked up to mantain and moderate. Not certain but thinking you're Australian to my US EST we should be able to cover all time zones very well this way.

Have a great day

[waltzmatildah]

I am indeed an Aussie, so yes, we should definitely have the time zone thing covered! Though, and I totally should have told you this earlier, I'm off to New Zealand tomorrow for a conference (and some skiing on the side!!) so I'll be internet AWOL for the next week which is very sucky of me I know, but I promise I'll be on board 100% as soon as I get back.

Apologies again, but I will definitely make it up to the comm on my return.