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Only You [Bleach, Ulquiorra/Orihime, M]

Mar 23, 2011 23:25

Title: Only You
Author: valentineninja
Rating: M
Warning: Semi-explicit sex, PWP…
Summary: She was content with the fact that he understood that there was no one else occupying her heart.
Word Count: 2,819
Prompt: Dominant-Ulquiorra smut. By which I mean, him simply making the first move that leads to smut, with Orihime going "Eh! No! We can't do that here Ulquiorra ( Read more... )

length: oneshot, bleach, author: valentine'sninja, pairing: ulquiorra/orihime, rating: m, genre: romance

Comments 6

phoenix089 March 24 2011, 08:49:57 UTC

Oh dear gods *fans self* ♥
This was exactly what I was hoping for! Thankyou!

There was so many parts of this that I loved! The fact they had sex in Ichigo's room was just devious (Also, LOL! At RenjiRuki doing the same thing ... In the same room XDDD), Ulquiorra's thoughts were just amazing (And they had the exact edge of possessiveness that I was looking for. The kind that is hot instead overbearing - if that makes sense?). The door-sexing was also a bonus (There's just something about that position...)
Also, kinda random, but I really liked that you added Murcielalgo as Ulqui's, I don't know... Inner-Demon? I've always been really fond of that idea <3 ( ... )

lovely_masoka March 24 2011, 15:34:49 UTC

Oh My ♥ That was undoubtedly very, very hot. For your first UH fic, smut at that, it was deliciously good. I hope you write more. Unf

I love it when he's jealous. Even with a heart that will never go away and against the door.hnnnng and how he's telling her to be patient and just <333333333

I hope you do more requests and everything. <3 This was really, really enjoyable.

roxenna89 March 26 2011, 15:11:52 UTC

That was awesome. Loved the idea, loved the position The Renji/Rukia's presence. Great hawt story! *w*

nypsy2 April 21 2011, 22:14:46 UTC

2nd attempt--got a bad gateway error for 1st review.

luvd this. luvd renruki also being in there. luvd possessive ulqui & his inner resolve to keep her safe. can imagine hichigo lording over ichi that everyone but ichi gets laid in his own room... splendid job.

goodness <3 tomato_one April 27 2011, 04:31:25 UTC

There are so amany things i love about this fic( especally the renjiruki :)
i dont usually like posessive fics that much but you made it attractive not crass or demeaning.
Great fic keep up the good work!