The ringing in my shoulder

[violetcheetah]

From last week's writing workshop. The prompt: Start with the following line, and don't let you pen/fingers stop writing: "That long-distant day when your father took you to discover ice."

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I am supposed to write without stopping, but just saying father is enough to paralyze me with scenes, or flickers of scenes, ominous but unformed, the memory

Comments

[vettecat]

It's amazing how you're able to capture the moment so someone who wasn't there can feel it.